Emberglow-1a: The Indecent Proposal: Inspection by dphoadley
Open full image in new tab Members remain the original copyright holder in all their materials here at Renderosity. Use of any of their material inconsistent with the terms and conditions set forth is prohibited and is considered an infringement of the copyrights of the respective holders unless specially stated otherwise.
Description
This is in fact the very first scene, how the whole story actually begins, with the indecent proposal. The complete story will be told in subsequent scenes.
Based on the 1997 movie Firelight, by William Nicholson.
Some changes have been made in the story, Elisabeth Laurier' is now named Esther Abrabanel.
Scene: A dimly lit reception room, in Victorian London:
Time: Sometime in the winter of 1838.
Enter: the Governess, Miss Esther Abrabanel.
Go-Between: "Sit down,dear. -This one is Swiss by nationality, two years employment here in London as a governess, -piano, drawing, French of course."
Governess: (sits)
Go-Between: "How old are you dear?"
Governess: "22."
Go-Between: "Are you in good health?"
Governess: "Yes."
Go-Between: "Are both your parents still living?"
Governess: "My mother is dead."
Go-Between: "What was the cause your mother's death?"
Governess: "She died in childbirth."
The Master: (Whispers from where he's hiding behind a screen) Ask her to stand up.
Go-Between: "Stand up dear."
Governess: (Stands up)
Go-Between: "Turn around, -all the way."
The Master: (Whispers) Ask her what the money's for.
Go-Between: The father's in debt, so it seems.
The Master: (Whispers) Does she have any other income, any other way of making money?"
Go-Between: Sit down dear. -The Gentleman asks if you have any other way of raising the money that you need?"
Governess: "Does the Gentleman have any suggestions?"
Go-Between: My dear, you are very pretty, you could marry you know!"
Governess: "Yes, I could sell myself for life, -the gentleman's needs as I understand it are of a shorter duration!"
The Master: (whispers) Has she done this ever before?
Go-Between: "The Gentleman asks..."
Governess: "Can the Gentleman not ask for himself?
To be continued...
BACKGROUND SYNOPSIS:
In 1838, lovely Swiss governess Esther Abrabanel (Played by Sophie Marceau, the French Princess of Wales in Braveheart) agrees to conceive and bear the child of an anonymous English landowner (Steven Dillane, he plays Thomas Jefferson in the John Adams TV series), in return for which he'll pay her �£500.
He needs an heir to carry on his line, but who's wife has suffered a serious riding accident shortly after marriage, and can no longer bear children (she's actually in a vegetative state). Miss Laurier needs the money to pay her father's debt, and obtain his release from prison; but she's fiercely independent, and refuses to surrender to the yoke of a loveless marriage just for financial convenience and security.
So their mutual need brings them together. They meet for three days in a hotel on the coast of Normandy, during that time their relationship metamorphs from cold the mechanics of commercial contract sex, to a mutual lust, to a deep and abiding love. However, in spite of this awakened feeling between them, they part ways on their return to England, ostensibly never to see each other again.
At the birth of their child (a daughter),she surrenders her as agreed to the midwife to hand over to the father. However, unlike as agreed, she can neither forget her child, nor the man that she bore it to. Seven years pass, when one day she arrives at a remote Sussex estate, to be the governess of a young girl. The father of the girl, Charles Godwin, turns out to be the same anonymous landowner who met with her years before in the Normandy hotel, and the child Louisa is their daughter. So Esther has to be her own daughter's governess.
I strongly urge you to read more about Firelight (1997) at IMDB, and to follow this link to watch it in 11 consecutive segments on YouTube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YBJoNkFd5TA&feature=related
Another link to watch this movie online is here: http://moviescollections.info/video/6698-Firelight.html
One can also visit Firelight Screen Writer and Director, William Nicholson's site here: http://www.williamnicholson.com/qa/?failed#faq
Comments (17)
drifterlee
Beautiful job, Dave!
Sa_raneth
excellent Dave
lior
בס"ד חודש אדר מבורך לך! ממני ליאור
fls13
בס"ד חודש אדר מבורך לך! ממני ליאור
thefixer
Coolly presented Hoad, nice...
VDH
Excellent composition!
artistheat
Excellent Images and Work
Cgaynor
Tells a poignant story.
Indoda
Great work - great expression - very well done
Biffowitz
I'm with Cgaynor on this one!
brg
i like your work dad good job
Elcet
Very fascinating story on a modern subject, well done Dave!
2Loose2Trek
Fantastic work Dave ... I like the way you progress the dialogue. Well done.
NanetteTredoux
Sex, money, power. A potent mix. Very well done.
Bossie_Boots
Very interesting narative and a wonderful portrayal i really like this thank you for pointing the way im preying i get my broadband on today superb work my friend hugs lou x
Seaview123
Very nice work on telling the story with pictures. Her discomfort at the situation is in her expression. Good job on the story so far.
romangirl
Very realistic first scene!