Rolling and Thumbling by neles-e
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Description
All Nigh Long
(Singing...)
...but, John???
It's on us, now.
And,
We got it and
it won't come off.
They,
allthey
seem to be
making ground...
Some say,
the way
it is, now:
The Jungle/The Clearing
Some venture into:
The Jungle - SNARL!
The Others
stay clear
of
The Clearing
Because:
It's own, returning with
The Clearing
all over them.
Brain vs. Brawn
Which-is-Which
All of the world
everyone doin' it,
now.
Tit for Tat
An Eye for An Eye
All Around
Gaining Ground...
No Difference - Here or There
StarDust
falling...
on us, all.
Where You Are,
eh!
______________________________
* just kiddin - this started as - a lovesong.
Comments (3)
beachzz
I love this--just takes me so many places!!
Chipka
This goes in so many directions and it's quite a marvelous and evocative piece of writing...nicely abstract, but at the same time very concrete, very real, just not in a way that's easy to define. I love the fluid nature of this, the way it seems more driven by mood than a literal sense of action and reaction; it could be read as a story, as a dialogue between two characters, as a poem, as a mood experiment, as lyrics or at least something lyric based, and it's all-around fun. Great work.
NothingNess
such timing so lovely to watch these lovely lines as they merge