Journeys of Shelby Bly: Prologue P1/2 by Dream9Studios
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UPDATED November 22, 2010
Re-rendered everything and improved everything... I hope.
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Journeys of Shelby Bly
Prologue
Page 1 of 2
I was going to wait to upload this until I finished creating Chapter 1 but I changed my mind and decided to release it now. Work is going smoothly on Chapter 1 so I don't think you'll have to wait too long to see it. :) I hope to have it done by the end of the week... it's 11 pages unless I add/subtract some along the way.
Critique is welcomed. If you notice a spelling error or something wrong with the pictures, anything really, please let me know. I plan on having this one printed so I want to make sure everything is as close to perfect as I can get.
EDIT- Fixed some typos. :)
Comments (7)
MKeyes
Wow... beautiful scene, story - you are amazing!!
artistheat
Great Strip:)
ThunderStone
Good beginning but you misspelled "myth" in the second panel. It was spelled "muth". Otherwise you're off to a good start. Keep up the good work. You need the service of a bilingual proofreader if you're planning to print this for general distribution. "Senior" should be spelled "Señor"
RodS
Off to a great start, Lizzie! This is going to be a good series! Don't see anything that needs changed except the typos mentioned earlier. This is awesome work - I know from doing my own series how much work goes into this. Keep 'em coming!!
Orinoor
Really well crafted and composed.
mrestey Online Now!
WONDERFUL work Lizzie!!! I love the lighting - it really made the 3D effect pop. Looks like we are in for another excellent journey through the fabric of your imagination!
NetWorthy
An intriguing start, the journey begins...