This place by KristiS

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I am getting mixed signals and I do not want to keep visiting this place. This place of loneliness and hurtfulness. This place of silence and emptiness. This place where the biggest of all rollercoasters live but not the fun kind, the kind that makes one want to vomit. I know what I must do and yet it's so hard. I have to leave this place and never return. For the most part, it is not fun at all so what keeps drawing me here? Why have I been so compelled to stay? Well, here goes, head held high, eyes wide open, I'm stepping out...wish me luck. Wait, how do I let it be known I am never returning without hurting the one I love? How do I know it's the right decision? I've taken chances and I've tried, I can honestly say I've given my all. I guess I will have to take a chance and see what life is about outside this place. I think it will be better for all involved. Okay, here we go, deep breath..I'm now turning in my season passes.

Comments (15)

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nickcharles

8:51PM | Fri, 15 October 2010

Mixed signals indeed. Nice work! I love how the last line ties it together: "I'm now turning in my season passes."

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KristiS

3:59PM | Tue, 19 October 2010

Thank you very much Nick!! I will have more to come..I've been writing like crazy! :)

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JaneEden

3:21PM | Tue, 20 September 2011

Very beautiful writing you have a gift, well done! hugs Jane xx

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KristiS

10:19AM | Thu, 22 September 2011

Thank you very much Jane! Hugs,

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dochtersions

12:35PM | Sat, 09 June 2012

I like your writings, there is much to think about in it. I'm writing in Dutch, poetry and some kind of biographic things. thank you for sharing. And thank you for your lovely comment. Best wishes 'in your season passes'. :)

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KristiS

1:21PM | Sat, 09 June 2012

Thank you very much:)

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