Canals of New Mars: Loud Silence by flavia49
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Eve awoke slowly. She felt as weak as a rag doll. Her knees failed her as she tried to get up, and she sat down on the edge of the bed. She was no longer in the intensive care unit. She felt dizzy and her ears were buzzing. "It may be the after-effects of the fever," she thought trying to fought a strange feeling. She tried to summon up her strength.
Eve heard the two scamps chirp in the next room. "Well, they too have made it!" and the others too, fortunately.
Then a sudden nausea forced her to retch, but it wasn't from herself ...: "Vickie!"
Vickie was sick, very sick indeed.
Eve focused on Vickie. The ship had been infected - Eve immediately knew it - and was struggling.
"How did they manage to vaccinated her?" Eve wondered then scolded herself. "Silly me, sure Jay found a way."
She called Vickie. The ship didn't reply. Vickie was fighting the pain and upheaval that the vaccine caused, a truly violent reaction on her.
"Come on Vickie, later you'll be better!" Eve tried to support her gently. The ship barely reacted, all focused on her fight and on something else that she cherished as if it were very precious.
Eve had never felt such care in Vickie's mind.
"I have to tell Jay," she thought and that feeling she was fighting off since she woken up, hit her the hardest like a clout on her face.
"Jay!" Eve's heart seemed to skip a beat. "Jay!" Eve called mentally.
No answer, but the quality of that silence terrified her. Not finding him next to her, when she woke up, had lulled her in the illusion that he had business somewhere in the space. But unconsciously she knew it was not true. Even when in the hyperspace, there was a certain feeling of his presence in her mind. Just a resonance, but there it was. Now the silence was deafening. "'Cool it, Eve!' Jay would said, 'analyze the situation!'" she thought.
In the depths of her mind she still felt the strength of Jay's hug, his love that embraced her soul, then suddenly, nothing. It was not like the silence before, when she had not yet given him the gift. Nor was the same silence when he closed his mind. She felt the 'ticking' of his mind behind the mental screen very well. A gap opened in her stomach. Eve analyzed the memory of Adam's death. But Adam wasn't telepathic. This silence was different. Eve tried to remember her own perceptions at the time of the old queen's demise. But she only remembered her relief for the stopping of the old hag's constant grilling. Yet, Eve was certain that this silence was different. Once JS told her about the black holes. No one could see a black hole, but everything was affected by this singularity. Jay's silence was like a black hole. It was absolute, singular. This silence called up a presence, not a lack of it. But it was different from what she had ever experienced.
"You're well again!" Vasquez said coming in with Lee.
Lee checked her parameters, everything was back to normal: "You've to eat something", he said looking uneasy.
"Jay? Where's Jay?" anguish engulfed Eve's voice.
Vasquez frowned at Lee, urging him with her chin. Lee sighed and told Eve what had happened. "That section is sealed up and the ship ... I don't know."
"She's sick." Eve spoke like a robot. In Lee's mind she clearly read that he believed Jay was dead. "Jay is not dead!" her throat stiff and sore for the effort to hold her tears back.
"He left this for you." Vasquez said placing a hand on hers to comfort her and handing her a letter.
They left her alone.
"Eve, my love, I do this for Vickie, for our people. The captains didn't come back, the songs say. So I'm going devil-knows-where, but, I swear, I'll never leave you. While there's a spark of life in me, I'll try to get back to you. I fear nothing, for you are with me, my love, my Eve."
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Comments (61)
DananJaya_Chef
renecyberdoc
excellent again and most inspiring.
Minda
excellent scene and story flavia
drifterlee
AWesome scene and story!
mickeyrony
You tell your fine frescoes with warm moments of vision my Beatiful as . Congratulations again and thanks mile ((5 + +)) Tu racontes très bien tes fresques avec de chaleureux moments de vision comme ma Belle . Bravo encore et mile mercis((5++))
lieselotte2000
Stunning grade of realism.
Madbat
Very well laid out scene, it actually looks like a hospital room!
brycek
Nice scene and story..well done!!
jac204
Looking forward to the next chapter. Great scene.
Kaartijer
Awesome scene, very well composed!
tennesseecowgirl
excellent work.
CoreyBlack
Very nice! I like this a lot!!
MagikUnicorn
excellent :)
jmb007
belle scene!
shorterbus
I'm betting he just slipped out for a pack of smokes.
amota99517
Outstanding work!
2Loose2Trek
A moving story and incredible image ... well done.
bkhook
A wonderful story to go with the scene.
mapps
excellent :-) hugs
Richardphotos
outstanding scene and idea
clbsmiley
Marvelous details my dear... great story... hanging again... waiting.
virginiese
excellent light and scene !
anmes
Great scene..super composition
Thetis
superb work
carlx
Very beautiful composition and story!!!
OrphanedSoul
An excellent scene!
qrud
Fine warm Christmas to you.
mgtcs
Perfect render and setting, a great story! Loved it!
myrrhluz
Excellent and moving narrative and image! I like the description of the unease that Eve feels, even before she is aware of it. I often think of what it would be like to be in telepathic contact with someone else and what it would be like to then lose that contact. I believe Eve will get Jay back. Wonderful rendering of Eve. She looks like someone who has been very ill and is weak. Great poses and expressions. Eve dazed and groggy. Lee concerned and a bit guilty, because of the role he played (though he had no choice). I like his hand upon the chair. Very nicely done. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
pspworkshop
Fantastic!