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Description
no answer
is anyone there
the silence is deafening
quiet as a tomb
words written often
sent into thin air it seems
none of them returned
12/27/10
Comments (11)
Meisiekind
Omigosh - how powerful! Incredible work dear friend!
mgtcs
OMG....What a powerful image and words, A truly inspired work!
durleybeachbum
Superb!
jayfar
I am speechless - there is no answer!!!
bazza
Excellent words and so true!!
Faemike55
oooof! Gut-punching words and great image Excellent
auntietk
What a beautifully written haiku set. Powerful and visceral ... excellent work!
goodoleboy
"Hello, operator, I keep ringing, but there's no answer. I'm all alone here and I think there's someone downstairs in the house. I've got to talk to the police!" Stellar reflective texture in this fine nighttime ocean image, Marilyn.
Chipka
I love a good double-haiku, especially evocative modern ones like this. I love the image that goes with it. I think you're re-inventing the artform here, as your image and the double-whammy haiku duo really work perfectly together. I'm up later than I should be and I'm off to bed after writing this, but I have to say that the words and image here are the best way to close out this day. I love it...the tone is plaintive and declarative all at once. What a balance! This rocks! Yeah, it's a goody!
CoreyBlack
Very nice! The combination of the words and picture are quite haunting.
danapommet
Beautiful words! There is no sound, when you are way out there, alone on the ocean. Dana