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Sorry for the post of the same page but some of my friends were having trouble following the story as it was. How about you guys, can you tell what's going on without the word captions to assist? I'd like to know.... Also here's a reworked page. Which do you think tell the story better as you see it. again with out the accompanying story text? All feedback welcomed.
Comments (5)
legomegacy
why aren't there words?
fudster
Hahaha, good question. There will be but a good storyteller should be able to tell the story without words. Once I have all 24 pages of the 1st issue completed I'll post all the pages with words and all.
crender
Seaview123
A cool comic book page. You can figure out some of the action, but you'll need the words to really pull it together, though. Very nice work!
fudster
Thanks again Tom, Someone that actually read the comments. Words will come soon. trying to finish up the other pages.