Fall of the Gods Page 6 by Spydraxis
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How bad is it.....really?
Comments (3)
ragouc
Cool characters. Very good work.
Vagabund
Well done! Two tips for you to make it even better: Let the font size be the same over all pages and don´t place the text in the text bubbles so close to the bubble border. :-)
Spydraxis
@ Vagabund yeah I didn't script this out first and was trying to fit stuff in as I went. This was originally a novel so I apologize in advance it it seems to be a long read and moves slowly at first I promise it gets better as i get the readers up to speed on how this world is. Thanks for the critique beieve me I am listening and WILL use any tips I can get thats why this stuff looks as sweet as it does now. Thanks to all for the compliments too everyone here is far more generous than at some other sites I've been to.