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It was windy on the day that Hej took me to the Central Temple. Borá and Lÿsti—both given to more pragmatic concerns—remained at home, tending the garden and talking; I think that garden work is more a pleasure to them than necessity’s task. Indeed, a whole third of our rocky, stubborn garden is given exclusively to Borá’s favorite orange blossoms, and Lÿsti’s wiry vines. And so yes, the pragmatic delights of garden-tending were theirs on the day that Hej walked by my side through the dusty streets of Ůtef. Hej carried onionskins in a small, lacquer box; I carried salt and incense and flat, round charcoals stamped with the bas relief likeness of a sprouting onion. Our destination lay ahead and we walked the gauntlet of fruit stands and fishmongers hawking the bounty bribed from the half subterranean Lóz. There are aspects of Ůtef as underground as its river, but I have scarcely seen these parts of the city: these underground warrens, damp with river-mist and lit only by a copper-man’s wires and domesticated lightening in oblate, glass bulbs. Center Temple stood underground, on an island, Hej said, where the underground river widened. We descended after a time, down spiral stairs carved into living rock. The air cooled, light faded, shifted, and carried a different, half-wavering hue. I was in a different world: half dark and loud with echoes. It was beautiful, if alien. Where Ůtef—above ground—was a city of stone and stucco: angular and blocky, Ůtef—below ground—was a rounded, meandering labyrinth. It smelled of rampant moisture, of mold and of black soil. It smelled of algae and of mushrooms. It smelled of onions. I knew that onions grew (with some difficulty) along the above-ground banks of the Lóz, and I knew that the Ůt’ēžen maintained delicate crops—elsewhere: in vats. Though I knew of Ůtef underground, I never imagined onions to be common there. In silence, we walked through a narrow passage. It opened—some 200 paces later—into a vast dome of a chamber, centered—I thought—with the bulb of an enormous onion. It was visual trickery, an act of devotion. No onion grew there, but one had been carved and dusted with gold; it might have taken a dozen horses—nose to tail—to surround it. Hej chose a spot near to the structure, and I was overcome by the sound of chanting and laugher. Others had come to commemorate Naming Day, and Hej—among them—sat before the stone-carved bulb, and instructed me in the ritual. We poured salt and centered the mound with charcoal…we lit the coals and waited for them to smolder. We dusted them with incense. And then we sat, face to face with fragrant smoke between us. We held our silence for a while, and when it broke, it was to the sound of Hej reciting his father’s history. I learned of the man named Ivór; his wives and his brother-husband. I heard tales of bawdy exploits, and quiet remembrances of Hej’s childhood lessons. I heard marvels and mysteries far richer than anything I’d known in Elül, and near the end of Hej’s telling, he included me in his narrative. Near ritual’s end, Hej opened his lacquered box and drew a single onion skin into the light: one from an onion bulb I’d given him…an onion grown in Elül. He cradled it in both hands, whispering to it…giving wishes, as he’d explained (later.) He placed the dry, fragile skin in my hands and I did the same. Done, our wishes safe in the skin’s hollow, Hej took the skin and placed it on the fragrant embers. He watched, entranced at is broke into smoke and smoldered into ash. I watched him, touched and amazed by the look of innocent rapture on his face. Onions, I learned that day, possessed the power to carry wishes. *** This is the same onion skin in plain, old fashioned lamp-light. No postwork, except for resizing and a small bit of level adjustment. And, as always, thank you for viewing, reading, and commenting, and I hope you’re having a fantastic week.

Comments (22)


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SSoffia

4:18PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

Beautiful series transparency and clarity are great!!

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durleybeachbum

4:19PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

A captivating tale! Isn't that strong shadow in your photo surprising!

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GARAGELAND

4:25PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

Captivating story!!!!!!!!!

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MrsRatbag

4:26PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

The tale unfolds like an onion...fantastic work!

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PaisleyRose

4:51PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

I will never again look at my onions in the same way again. Marvelous story and onion skin.

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sandra46

5:16PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

SUPERB VARIATION AGAIN! IS THAT SKIN STILL FRESH? LOL!

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DreamersWish

5:21PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

A most interesting story. I love the lighting and the softness. Well done!

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auntietk

5:48PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

Even in ordinary lamplight, this onion skin is outstanding! I imagine myself small enough (or the onion skin big enough) that I can walk through that doorway and into the interesting light patterns that must abound on the floor beneath it. The dome above my head is translucent, and the atmosphere inside is smoky, although with no source of flame to be found. Such a beautiful place!

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blinkings

6:23PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

The king of the onions! Did you see my latest post! It was kind of like you posed for it! It didn't really look like you, but it had the city in the background that could be Chicago!

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kgb224

7:47PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

Stunning capture my friend.

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mgtcs

8:11PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

Excellent variation here, fabulous lighting, very impressive writing as usual!

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danapommet

10:08PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

Golden view of this golden onion skin. Dana

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RodS Online Now!

11:52PM | Tue, 25 January 2011

Nice light and shadows on this, Chip!

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beachzz

12:01AM | Wed, 26 January 2011

Now that I've seen so many variations of onion skins, it occurs to me that I've NEVER been able to peel and onion so perfectly!! I"m obviously missing something.

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lick.a.witch

4:52AM | Wed, 26 January 2011

What a welcome sight this would be for a weary ant sized traveller! And you do realise, don't you, that no one here can now peel an onion without thinking of you! ^=^ Once more an excellent shot and wonderfully warm narrative. ^=^

Ilona-Krijgsman

7:38AM | Wed, 26 January 2011

wow....what a wonderful lighting and pose....love the tones...you can make from such simple things such a wonderful artwork to think about....well taken....

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bmac62

7:50AM | Wed, 26 January 2011

I shall never look at an onion skin as a common thing again:) Do I dare even throw one away? Great story...simply a fabulous series. Know...even when I don't comment, I am reading and viewing all your posts.

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flavia49

8:46AM | Wed, 26 January 2011

awesome series!!

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helanker

10:17AM | Wed, 26 January 2011

HAHAHA! I think like Bill. How can I throw onion skin away ever again :-) SO beautiful in all. I too love this series.

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evielouise

11:10AM | Wed, 26 January 2011

I wonder if we used a orange skin??lol I have a orange tree right outside my window:: LOve what you've done and no tears??????lol great work!~

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makron

2:11PM | Wed, 26 January 2011

Genial composicion...very well done

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marybelgium

11:24AM | Thu, 27 January 2011

excellent !


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