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Description
This is a work in progress.
The images aren't even finished.
I was just hoping to get some feedback on layout, word flow, and if people understand what is going on (not a whole lot on one page I know).
I'll try to do a couple of more rough pages like this.
First impressions are most important at this point.
Comments (2)
MrGorf
You are off to a great start! A couple suggestions, though: when I read the phrase "dark matter" I think astronomy, not, um, parapsychology. Also, the text towards the bottom is getting a little smallish. But, I like the concept and I look forward to seeing what you do with it!
namrettek
You should think astronomy. Hopefully it will be more clear in later pages... Thanks for the comment!