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First Contact

Vue Science Fiction posted on Mar 11, 2011
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The community we found at Calton's Bluff was a wretched affair. All without exception were scrawny and malnourished, with a feral glint that our military training told us to be wary of. Nobody there was more than twenty-five years old; meaning all the inhabitants there had been a child when the Dust invaded Illaria. When we asked where the adults were, they showed us a make shift graveyard full of pitiful mounds with sticks as markers. They said that many of the adults had died in the first few years, either succumbing to the local wild life or changing into monsters themselves. We also saw some recently dug graves, and they were marked with toys and scribbled notes. These were the children that been born and raised more recently, and who had in some cases become warped at an early age. We didn't have much food to spare, but it was good quality and they fell upon it like flies. They were eager for stories from the outside world and sat around us expectantly as we recounted our adventures over the years. Despite their age, it was clear that they had a good knowledge of the area, and a keen sense of survival. We asked them more about the starport, and learned that there were small craft here. None however were capable of interstellar travel, but what was there might give us a chance to explore the planet further. Our conversation moved to discuss the ramparts carved into the ground, which appeared to protect the bluff from any kind of mass attack. A few of the older children shook their heads, but the younger ones pointed their fingers towards the sky and shouted gleefully. "The White Witches made them!" They didn't recognise the name Lazloi, so we asked when they had last seen the White Witches. It seemed that it was when we witnessed their attack on the main starport some ten years ago and had not been seen since. We returned to our vehicles to sleep overnight, and the next day opened a small field hospital to check the health of the group. While that was happening, the senior staff in our group and myself spoke to the leaders and started the negotiations to bring them into our little network of villages. It was an easy trade; our food and expertise in return for access to the starport. Emerging from the tent we were met by a small band of children jumping around and pointing excitedly towards the sky. Over the dusty town behind the ramparts was the glistening blue bulk of a Lazloi craft, a beautiful and graceful vehicle whose detailed scrollwork flashed in the sun. It settled slowly to the ground grinding the brickwork below it to dust. For a while nothing happened and nobody dared to approach. It was only after some twenty minutes that a side door opened, and out stepped a white haired figure dressed in white flowing clothes. The younger children gasped in awe, and even the young adults were visibly moved. As the shimmering form approached, I could only feel anger at what this arrogant race had done to us. While the children backed away as the Lazloi came closer, I stood my ground until the Lazloi and I were only ten metres apart. "I am Alisandra, daughter of Hybritta, daughter of Kyraenia," said the Lazloi in a voice filled with musical tones. "I am here because I need your help." Her words touched the nerve that was gnawing inside me, so I pulled out a gun and pointed it straight at her. "You can go to hell, all of you!" There was a sharp snap like a bullet being fired, and instantly the Lazloi was protected by some kind of swirling barrier. She held up her hands and smirked at me with a sidelong glance. "We should talk", she said simply. -- Mission log of Lieutenant Ara Mercator, Recon Group -- Mission Clock: Unknown V4 with Space Dweller outfit and Nabia Hair, SP3 with FAS-X outfit. Space craft created in Cinema 4D. Rendered in Vue 8 Complete. Thanks for looking, comments appreciated.

Comments (12)


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drace68

3:01PM | Fri, 11 March 2011

Oh wow ! Another great episode. But I'm not certain about the Lieutenant's provenance or how she got to Calton's Bluff. Great thumbnail description of the natives.

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geirla

4:09PM | Fri, 11 March 2011

Great image and story!

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Star4mation

5:00PM | Fri, 11 March 2011

Super image and story Mark :)

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gchuck

5:19PM | Fri, 11 March 2011

Always wanting more! Beautiful work!

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Ancel_Alexandre

6:21PM | Fri, 11 March 2011

Great pic and story! I really like the poses of the characters, the amount of details on the ship, and the ruins in the background offer a nice perspective over the situation. Bravo!

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Imaginatos

12:12AM | Sat, 12 March 2011

NICE done ! :)

KnightWolverine

12:34AM | Sat, 12 March 2011

Good Reading to match an equally nice Sci-fi Scene!..

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RETIRED

12:37AM | Sat, 12 March 2011

I can't begin to express how much I enjoy your ongoing tale of the Lazloi ... hopefully you will keep up the good work for a very long while to come.

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bigbraader

6:20AM | Sat, 12 March 2011

Very cool sci-fi. Nice sense of scale on the ship.

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texboy

7:28AM | Sat, 12 March 2011

another winner in this great series!

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castaneda

1:19AM | Sun, 13 March 2011

Really like the feel of the mega ship. A Starwarsian kind of epic feel. Excellent

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kjer_99

1:17PM | Fri, 25 March 2011

A much closer match between story and illustration.


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