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Everyone's the same

Writers Realism posted on May 21, 2011
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As I watch this young couple Try to teach their son to swim He is so nervous And they are laughing so hard It occurs to me Everyone wants the same thing They want to love To be loved To have someone they can share with To be there when things are really good To be there when things are really bad Someone to say its ok I am here Someone to be there As you can tell I have had to much time on my hands the last few days haha. I saw this nice young family playing in the river and this came to me. I believe it is true of all of us at some level. I hope you like it Randy

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Bossie_Boots

1:43PM | Sat, 21 May 2011

Wonderful words pity there are so many who want to ruin things because of jealousy and greed love this though randy well done superb writing !!

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adrie

2:06PM | Sat, 21 May 2011

Beautiful wirtten words Randy, love it.

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lonely_wolf

2:17PM | Sat, 21 May 2011

The ability to give - without demanding a return value - is the rarest quality of man - You could also call it true love. I also know how impatient I was when my son learned to swim ... Nowadays we go snorkel and marvel the underwater world together - he is 7.

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eekdog

2:50PM | Sat, 21 May 2011

love is beautiful and so is the words randy.

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rickp98908

3:44PM | Sat, 21 May 2011

VAGG if you would do some work at work you wouldn't have that much free time,HaHa. Good poem. You are right, At least everyone should.

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Faemike55

4:08PM | Sat, 21 May 2011

It is very true, Randy thanks for reminding us of what we need most in life

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kbrog

4:26PM | Sat, 21 May 2011

Wonderful words! :)

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sixstring

7:36PM | Sat, 21 May 2011

Short, sweet, and straight to the point. Reading your work sometimes makes me wish I had the power you show here, of saying as much as I have to say, in only a few words. You have a gift Randy.

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Isabelle711

10:25PM | Sat, 21 May 2011

The words you write here are so very true. We all crave someone to be there. :))) The words "It's Ok" means alot to ones heart. Beautiful writing. :)))) Thank you for sharing this. :))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :))))))

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hipps13

11:13PM | Sat, 21 May 2011

scrolling to look for a picture and realizing mention it only was...the young family so a smile helps too to get over the fool we can feel too wonderful work, Randy warm hugs, Linda

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wysiwig

2:53AM | Sun, 22 May 2011

Beautiful words Randy and so true. It can really hurt when you realize you've never had love and never will.

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dakotabluemoon

6:25AM | Sun, 22 May 2011

Well put together sweet peeps and i just wish it would get warm enough here to go swimming and the crappy damn rain would stay away cause we got 5 inches of rain last wk. in 1 day and rain all this wk and with 2000 acres to plant not one field is planted as of yet so when it comes time we will have to run day and night just to try and finish so wish us luck and keep the rain away.( Big Hug )

LilRedWagon

2:14PM | Sun, 22 May 2011

''Everyone's the same'' - Have you seen the Republicans and Democrats in the American Congress?

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mgtcs

6:52PM | Sun, 22 May 2011

Marvelous poem, another precious work!

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Rainastorm

11:24AM | Wed, 01 June 2011

VERY nice Randy!!!


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