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Carrier at Dock

Bryce (none) posted on Jul 25, 2002
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I'm very eager to get feedback on my images, especially how to improve them. If anyone wants my meshes just drop me an email at jamesg@sonic.net. More information on how this image was created can be found at: http://www.sonic.net/~jamesg/sf_art/cruiser_at_dock.htm

Comments (5)


AceC

12:07AM | Fri, 26 July 2002

Great looking ship. Since you want something to improve your image, I'll dig up a few things you might want to consider: The ship has no running lights... You might want to add some red and green dots to it. Also, you might want to make the hangar bay on this carrier a bit more visible :)

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frndofyaweh

8:36AM | Fri, 26 July 2002

wow! great carrier. i like the textures.

jamesg

11:59AM | Fri, 26 July 2002

AceC--Good point about the running lights! I have lights all over the towers, but none of the ship itself. Your thought about the hangar bay is interesting, because there's no part of this model that I think of as being the hangar bay. I just modeled a big ol' spaceship, and decided when it was done that it's a carrier. I used to have more elaborate stories about my models, but I found that this was actually interfering with my abilty to asses it's visual impact. Now I mainly go for the visual imact and let the story emerge.

Allen9

1:49PM | Fri, 26 July 2002

Good image, but somehow it seems out-of-scale with the towers. The towers certainly look like they have windows. If those are windows, then that ship is awfully small to be a carrier. If those aren't windows, there should be some windows, or some other indication of scale, to give an idea of the relative size of the ship. As it is, compared to the towers, the ship appears to be about 3 stories tall and less than 100 ft long. Still a neat ship design, though.

jamesg

9:16PM | Fri, 26 July 2002

Allen9: Hmm, I agree the the objects aren't really to the same scale, and it's the windows that give that away. The observation window in the carrier looks like it's almost the same size as the windows on the towers, and it should be much larger. I created the towers first, and then thought, "Hey, a big ship would look good floating there! Now that you point this out it's really obvious. Thanks!
nu-be: Thanks, I love the shareware modeling program that supplied the primitives I used, a Japanese app called DOGA-2.
What's the protocol on these boards if I do a new version of this image? Should I delete the old one, leave it in place and just post a new one, or does it not matter?


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