I am the great hypocrite by vaggabondd

Writers • Realism • posted on Jun 12, 2011

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I am the great hypocrite I scream the sky is falling When it is someone else’s fight I scream live or die There is nowhere in between But when the fight is on my shore When it is knocking at my door The bravery is gone I have no voice I run to the corner and hide Merciful God I pray Shaking and afraid Not for strength But for forgiveness For being so weak

Comments (21)

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flaviok

7:11PM | Sun, 12 June 2011

Impressionante e contundente, alho que somente um grande poeta como você meu amigo poderia expressar tão profundamente "But when the fight is on my shore When it is knocking at my door The bravery is gone I have no voice I run to the corner and hide ", aplausos (5)

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Faemike55

7:29PM | Sun, 12 June 2011

This is a gut-punching poem/statement.

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brycek

7:50PM | Sun, 12 June 2011

Well put, Randy!!

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mgtcs

8:37PM | Sun, 12 June 2011

This is really a very strong impacting poem my friend, fabulous work!

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jocko500

8:41PM | Sun, 12 June 2011

this is wonderful words

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eekdog

9:28PM | Sun, 12 June 2011

love the way you use words Randy, great job..

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beachzz

12:28AM | Mon, 13 June 2011

You sure know how to speak a truth we don't want to hear--wow!!

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Bossie_Boots

1:00AM | Mon, 13 June 2011

I agree with above comment very well written superb Randy !!

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wysiwig

2:59AM | Mon, 13 June 2011

Very well put, Randy. Jon Stewart once said, "If you don't stand up for your principles when they are under attack they are not principles, they are hobbies."

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dakotabluemoon

6:30AM | Mon, 13 June 2011

Very cool writing and truth.

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drifterlee

10:41AM | Mon, 13 June 2011

Wondeful poem, Randy!

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kbrog

3:26PM | Mon, 13 June 2011

That is deep! :) Excellent poem and statement!

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VEDES

3:29PM | Mon, 13 June 2011

VERY VERY IMPORTANT POEM!!1BRAVO!!!

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adrie

5:22PM | Mon, 13 June 2011

Great poem and statement Randy.

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rickp98908

8:36PM | Mon, 13 June 2011

Thank God there are people who will defend our shores.

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Isabelle711

10:15PM | Mon, 13 June 2011

I truly love how you show your true feelings. God is always there to help us when we are at our weakest. :)))) If you need to be weak it is okay. We all get like this at times. This poem gets rite to the heart. If you need us we are here for you anytime. Please take care my friend. Thank you for sharing your heart. :))) I give to you a smile to carry in your heart. :)))))

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galung

11:20PM | Mon, 13 June 2011

beautiful poem

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hipps13

1:31AM | Tue, 14 June 2011

wonderful work warm hugs, Linda

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lonely_wolf

2:33AM | Tue, 14 June 2011

Impressive words! Great poem!

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geico2000

1:12AM | Tue, 21 June 2011

My friend, this is a beautiful poem, that moves the soul. I could comment for hours, there would be much to say ... but ... what your words convey, says it all.

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