Discomfit by hipps13
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Description
When immature comes to town
Embarrass comes too
Could tired be it
Or the frustration of
As to what transpires
Between the mind
And the mouth
©24 June 2011 LKS
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Thank you so much
means a lot
Comments (15)
mgtcs
Another amazing abstract and poem, the colors are just amazing, wonderful work!
VEDES
VERY NICE WORK!!!!!
auntietk
Oh oh oh! I love your poem! Even mature, sometimes, mind and mouth should not meet! LOL! The image is wonderful. I love the composition, the segmented vibe, and the curtain softly rippling. Wonderful textures ... this is quite tactile!
vaggabondd
beautiful work my friend :)
Bossie_Boots
Oh i love this im going through something like this linda i can really relate to those words !!
fallen21
Beautiful work.
jophoto
"What transpires between the mind and the mouth" Yes indeed. And the computer's speed of communication doesn't allow the mind to work before we hit send...sometimes... I like the image also.
peedy
Beautiful! Gorgeous colors and lighting. Corrie
bmac62
Immature says it all Self-centered action Without thought Without feeling Mature developes a language Some of touch Some of words Some of giving May self-centeredness Learn its language And grow up Before showing up
annie5
An amazing abstract Linda! Great light and colors too :)
Eleandras
Awesome!
lyron
Great creation!!
wysiwig
Abraham Lincoln once said, "It is better to remain silent and be thought a fool than to speak and remove all doubt." This is one of your best poems imo, brilliant, concise with tremendous impact. You do what almost no one else on this site does, you inspire others to create their own word art. Outstanding image. I agree with Tara, very tactile.
ArtistKimberly
Excellent
gunsan
Love the colors and abstract forms, as well as the poem!