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I Am Not The Prodigal Son

Writers Realism posted on Jun 30, 2011
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I have been on a journey A journey in my mind Of my soul Things that use to make sense when I was young Just don’t seem right anymore My journey has taken me far Far from the ones I love the most When I knocked on the door I was informed I am not the prodigal son I am not welcome home anymore I do not blame her I went too far from where she is comfortable But I am so sad for both our loses ( I don't think my baby sister loves me anymore )

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Bossie_Boots

1:13PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

Oh bless you Randy i am sure she does sometimes when we are hurting we hit out and hurt the ones we love keep trying give her time hugs lou x

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wysiwig

1:23PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

Been there Randy. My baby sister is the prodigal in our family but she will not even try as you have done. It's a sad thing, I know. All you can do is pick yourself up and move on.

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neles-e

1:46PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

... Good to see you branching out: HEART to HEAD HEAD to HEART gOOD bALANCe .

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adrie

2:04PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

Very sad but also beautiful writen words dear Randy! Stay strong my friend.

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drifterlee

2:06PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

That's so sad, Randy. I'm sure she loves you!

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geico2000

2:11PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

For my family, I'm the prodigal son. No, not exactly. I'm the black sheep. Because I'm free. I have taken the path more difficult, I'm a rebel. But I can't be another person. Your poem touched my soul. I know that not always we are understood. We go trough our way... even if it's not the way that their wanted. When I'm escaped from my "ex" husband, I lost my family. But, if I not escaped, I was dead. So, my choice: my family or my life? I chose my life, and the life of my daughter, and now, I'm alive. Their will understand, I hope. Excuse me, my dear friend, for many words.

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Feliciti

2:34PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

i find no words with my bad english ,sorry ! but i thinking of you and i understand ! time will tell ,hope so !

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jocko500

6:24PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

time will heal her. cool words

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Faemike55

6:46PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

Eventually, she will learn to love you for who you are

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flaviok

6:55PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

Um solido poema da alma, que varre as veias e mente, que só um grande poeta como você pode traduzir em palavras ritmadas meu amigo, soberbo, aplausos (5)

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rickp98908

7:06PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

Sorry buddy.

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eekdog Online Now!

8:05PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

powerful words my friend.

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mgtcs

11:32PM | Thu, 30 June 2011

Ohhh....another amazing writing, excellent image and great thoughts!

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lonely_wolf

1:07AM | Fri, 01 July 2011

Very touching words - sad - but real life. Be strong - Tomorrow is another day and perhaps a new trial.

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dakotabluemoon

5:47AM | Fri, 01 July 2011

Wow strong words and to the point but i hope this is not true for u cause u seem to be such a honey bear.

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Isabelle711

11:00AM | Fri, 01 July 2011

This is a most deep and touching poem. :)))) I hope your Sister opens her eyes to how much you love her. :)))) Thank you for sharing. :))))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :))))

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Merrylee

1:08PM | Sun, 03 July 2011

What did you do Randy?...my sister and brother had a fall out, but now on speaking terms


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