Meeting on the storm/End by mininessie
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Well...as i said this was made for a competition in a forum...it should be a short story so this is the end...but...perhaps in the future i can make a development for it... who knows ;D
Already arranged, William began his story.
"Well milady, you asked how I know you ...
would be difficult to explain without first tell you about my 'gimmick' "
he said with a grin.
"My 'gimmick' is more than just a ship ... is a research vehicle ...
What it researches? You would ask: ...
well ... something that has always fascinated me, the history ....
and what better way to know that being in every moment in the right place "
Eleanor's face reflected his astonishment again
"You mean ... ....?"
"Yes my lady .. is a machine for time travel ...
I know that your father also had his theories about it "
"But how you know ...?"
"No, do not panic, I have not been watching you....
the information I have is through books and newspapers "
"Then you ...."
"I am a time traveler ... but really not from a too distant future, my lady"
Eleanor did not know what to think, yes, her father had some theories about time travel ...
but that .. who was that man, and what was his interest on her?.
"Go on .... I beg you," said Eleanor.
"... willingly milady .your aircraft was an inspiration to me since childhood ...
Its invention is described in the books as a milestone in the history ...
your father is mentioned as the inventor and you as a partner ...
finally you both got the recognition that his work .. and yours, deserved "
These words produced a feeling of satisfaction in Eleanor,
William went ... now with a serious expression
"But something that always gave me a desolate feeling
which led me to interfere with the natural time´s line ....
was your death in the storm "
Eleanor jumped
"Did you mean ... I would have died in the storm?"
Eleanor said shocked
"You really did .... In my past, but .... I could not let it happen ...
That was really the reason that led me to build my 'gadget' ...
I just could not "
William, visibly moved, looked down trying to compose his expression,
finally got it, not without effort.
Eleanor looked at him with a mixture of admiration and gratitude.
"But then .... I owe you my life! "said Eleanor
"No! Not owe me anything ... do not misunderstand me my lady ... I expect nothing from you ...
all I would ask humbly as a favor, would be your friendship "
William said, not daring to look at her, fearing a negative response
"Of course you have it .. unconditionally ... you have earned it so far milord"
Eleanor said with a smile
"Moreover, I hope you help me to finally return home to
put the name of my father in the right place and to publicize his work "
"I will .... If it is what you want"
said William looking at her with a cheerful expression.
***************
A few days later, in every newspaper it could be read the news
about the success of the invention by Lord Greenway and
Lady Eleanor his daughter ....
and a brief pointing to a possible compromise of her
with a mysterious gentleman.
End
Comments (30)
Dreamingbee
so wonderful scene and story - great work ! all best for competition
Umbetro38
I agree with my sweetheart - wow
zaigodou
Very nice!!!
UteBigSmile
Bossie_Boots
Wow this is one of your best ines amazing just amazing !!
renecyberdoc
yeah you really should write stories always a pleasure.
dakotabluemoon
Very cute stuff and the story is superb work.
Faemike55
Cool story and great image, Ines
crystalknight
The lady’s expression is a priceless show of concern. Very interesting scene and excellent render!
Savage_dragon
A compromise, huh? Well. I guess he deserved it. ;) Thanks for the great story, sweetie! Love the render, too. Hugz ")
MKeyes
Whoaaaa, he brought her back to life from time travel huh? Good one... oh and only if that were so! Well done!
cricke49
wow! love the story, it was fantastic, you oughta get recognition big time for it and the image is excellent, my friend!:)*5
Cimaira
Excellent!! Wonderful story and great image.
jmb007
belle histoire!!
magnus073
Wonderful looking scene Ines, and the story is so well done and exciting
brycek
Nice scene and story..well done, Ines!!
mgtcs
Another amazing image Ines, excellent composition, loved their expressions. Marvelous story my dear!
CloverLinda
Wonderful expressions and posing. Great lighting. There's got to be romance here in the future. :))))))))))
bazza
Fabulous final chapter to your story and great image Ines.. Excellent!!!
npauling
Excellent lighting in this beautiful image.
DennisReed
Wonderful story & supporting Illustration!
SIGMAWORLD
Schöne Story und Render. Prima!
Flint_Hawk Online Now!
A very wonderful story & touching scene!
adrie
Beautiful image with the end of this story Ines....excellent work.
psyoshida
Beautiful story and wonderful scene. Wonderful work.
MarciaGomes
MARAVILHOSA HISTÓRIA MINHA AMIGA,FIQUEI SURPRESA QUE O CAVALHEIRO ERA UM VIAJANTE DO TEMPO,A CENA É MAGNIFICA OS PERSONAGENS SÃO FABULOSOS EXCELENTES POSES.+++++5 OBRIGADO POR COMPARTILHAR MAIS ESTA HISTÓRIA
MagikUnicorn
M A R V E L O U S
crender
Arah
that is beautiful! wonderful work!
NanetteTredoux
I Can't get enough!