JoSB: Chapter 2 Art by Dream9Studios

Poser • People • posted on Oct 27, 2011

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I created these full page illustrations to separate the chapters for my graphic novel. You can find the novel at my completely non-commercial site, www.shelbybly.net (it's non-commercial so please don't delete, dear mod). The novel is online for free, all I ask is that you leave me some feedback. :) Here's Shelby in the Peruvian temple's Pool Room with the glowing skulls while holding the first mapstone. You can see something swimming in the water behind her too. I'm still not sold on her expression. Like some of the others, I think this one needs more work.

Comments (7)

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ThunderStone

6:07PM | Thu, 27 October 2011

Perhaps you need to work on the eyelids... Either get them half closed as to express caution, or a little bit wider to exhibit wonderment.

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ArtistKimberly

6:07PM | Thu, 27 October 2011

Wonderful,

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Tholian

6:58PM | Thu, 27 October 2011

Yes, it's the brows and the eyes that need work for the expression here. I like the glow effect of the skulls here.

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RodS

7:15PM | Thu, 27 October 2011

Overall, I think it's very good. The light from the glowing skulls is wonderful! I might suggest a more concerned look - maybe a bit worried, with the eyes looking more to her right - she's just heard something disturb the water, and hasn't turned her head yet, but the eyes have reacted - and she's thinking 'OK, what was THAT??'

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