5 In The Morning by vaggabondd

Writers • Romance • posted on Oct 31, 2011

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The clock said 5 in the morning But the moon said it was still night It was so crisp out I know it had to be putting color In my cheeks I looked up into the heavens The sky was so clear I could see every star That was ever created Since the beginning of time And I thought of you I wondered if you could see What I was seeing I wondered if you were drinking your morning tea Looking out your window And thinking of me I wondered if the morning chill Put honeydew on your honey lips I wondered if before i died I would ever get To feel your kiss

Comments (17)

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BIPOLARTWO

4:19AM | Mon, 31 October 2011

These word's would make one wonder. really nice composition and pleasant to read

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flaviok

5:20AM | Mon, 31 October 2011

Um toque sublime de amor e esperança e versos tão maravilhosamente feitos meu amigo, aplausos (5)

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Isabelle711

6:51AM | Mon, 31 October 2011

This is so true bc here at 5:30 in the morn you can really feel the crisp in the air, and it makes me want to go back to bed and cover up. :))))) Temps in the 30's this morning and frost is ever so heavy it really makes it hard to make my son go out and get on the bus. :( I love how your poems make us feel what you are feeling. :)))))) I bet your wife loves to get all these beautiful poems my friend. :)))) Words from your heart to hers. :)))))) This is a most sweet poem. :)))))) Thank you for sharing your heart. :))))))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :))))))

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eekdog

7:33AM | Mon, 31 October 2011

killer poetry my friend..

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Faemike55

8:18AM | Mon, 31 October 2011

Very lovely

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Merrylee

10:37AM | Mon, 31 October 2011

Nice poem...

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beachzz

10:58AM | Mon, 31 October 2011

you always say it so well--!!

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Feliciti

11:54AM | Mon, 31 October 2011

very touching and lovely poem :)

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brycek

12:32PM | Mon, 31 October 2011

Nice poem, Randy!!

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kbrog

1:16PM | Mon, 31 October 2011

Wonderful poem! :)

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drifterlee

2:36PM | Mon, 31 October 2011

Very beautiful poem, Randy!!!!!

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adrie

2:49PM | Mon, 31 October 2011

Wonderful poem dear Randy.

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TallPockets

5:37PM | Mon, 31 October 2011

So, VB: An old friend o' TallPockets once went up to TEN ladies during an evening out. He asked EACH of them, one at a time, if they wanted to "GO HOME" with him .... NINE ladies SLAPPED him and walked away .... NUMBER TEN lady said, "YES". (WINK)

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mgtcs

11:56PM | Mon, 31 October 2011

Delightful poem my friend, excellent work as usual, congratulations!

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jocko500

11:03AM | Tue, 01 November 2011

wonderful

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wysiwig

1:40AM | Thu, 03 November 2011

My first kiss was with a girl I really cared about and I felt an electric spark on my lips. Poems like this make me wonder where she is now. Excellent work, Randy.

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