5 In The Morning by vaggabondd
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The clock said 5 in the morning
But the moon said it was still night
It was so crisp out
I know it had to be putting color
In my cheeks
I looked up into the heavens
The sky was so clear
I could see every star
That was ever created
Since the beginning of time
And I thought of you
I wondered if you could see
What I was seeing
I wondered if you were drinking your morning tea
Looking out your window
And thinking of me
I wondered if the morning chill
Put honeydew on your honey lips
I wondered if before i died
I would ever get
To feel your kiss
Comments (17)
BIPOLARTWO
These word's would make one wonder. really nice composition and pleasant to read
flaviok
Um toque sublime de amor e esperança e versos tão maravilhosamente feitos meu amigo, aplausos (5)
Isabelle711
This is so true bc here at 5:30 in the morn you can really feel the crisp in the air, and it makes me want to go back to bed and cover up. :))))) Temps in the 30's this morning and frost is ever so heavy it really makes it hard to make my son go out and get on the bus. :( I love how your poems make us feel what you are feeling. :)))))) I bet your wife loves to get all these beautiful poems my friend. :)))) Words from your heart to hers. :)))))) This is a most sweet poem. :)))))) Thank you for sharing your heart. :))))))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :))))))
eekdog
killer poetry my friend..
Faemike55
Very lovely
Merrylee
Nice poem...
beachzz
you always say it so well--!!
Feliciti
very touching and lovely poem :)
brycek
Nice poem, Randy!!
kbrog
Wonderful poem! :)
drifterlee
Very beautiful poem, Randy!!!!!
adrie
Wonderful poem dear Randy.
TallPockets
So, VB: An old friend o' TallPockets once went up to TEN ladies during an evening out. He asked EACH of them, one at a time, if they wanted to "GO HOME" with him .... NINE ladies SLAPPED him and walked away .... NUMBER TEN lady said, "YES". (WINK)
mgtcs
Delightful poem my friend, excellent work as usual, congratulations!
jocko500
wonderful
wysiwig
My first kiss was with a girl I really cared about and I felt an electric spark on my lips. Poems like this make me wonder where she is now. Excellent work, Randy.
Rainastorm
LOVE this one..............