You might want to look at the chair - there's something weird about the shadows on it (unless it's supposed to look like that :biggrin: ) Looks pretty well modelled although I'm no superstar modeller! but the whole thing feels a bit bland. Lot of white but there's nothing in the background - would be pretty easy to knock up a wall or something to go behind the scene and might make a pretty huge difference. Not at all bad for a beginner though

Okay cool, I will work on adding a back ground to it. Thanks for the suggestion.

Non sono esperto di modellazione , ma ,personalmente, trovo quale difetto principale l'illuminazione che rende l'immagine piatta . Sembra provenire dall'alto , dividendo in due le ombre . Una luce radente laterale cambierebbe molto la scena . Non conosco bene l'inglese , spero di essere comprensibile . I'm not an expert in modeling, but, personally, I find that the main fault light that makes the flat image. Seems to come from above, dividing into two shadows. A lateral oblique light the scene would change much. I do not know English well, I hope to be understandable.