I Had A Dream Last Night by vaggabondd
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I had a dream last night
There were thousands of bodies
Walking around bumping into each other
Because they had no eyes
Their eyes were taken away
Because when they could see
They had no vision
They had a voice
But all they could do was moan
Because when they could speak
They never had anything to say
Now they moan because of their pain
They were hungry
Hungry for salvation
But there was nothing left on the plate
Because when it was time to come in
They were too late
The scary thing is
The one in the middle
I recognized his face
This is a little darker than my poem yesterday lol. I wanted to write something so I put on a little music and this is what I came up with. The song that I listened to that put me in mood was â mad world by Gary Jules â if you want to try and write something gloomy I highly recommend this one. It works for me ha ha. Thanks for everything. I hope you like my poem
Randy
Comments (17)
Faemike55
Very cool work I can just picture all this happening
flaviok
How meu amigo, o sentido da poesia mais profunda, que só um verdadeiro poeta pode revelar¨ " Their eyes were taken away Because when they could see That had no vision "... Se pelo menos erem se derem conta, do que não vêem, não ouvem e não dizem, o amor e interior da alma humana. Brilhante, perfeito, aplausos mil How my friend, the deeper sense of poetry, that only a true poet can reveal ¨ "Their eyes were taken away Because when they could see That had no vision "... If at least erred if realize, than don't see, don't hear and not say, love and the interior of the human soul. Brilliant, perfect, applause thousand
Feliciti
i like it :) and know this song too !! really great done !!
barryjeffer
Excellent poetry... thank you for sharing.
alessimarco
~Penetrating!!~
eekdog
i had a dream the night before the broncos won, so much for my dreams, but yours sound scarry Randy, gripping and well written.
BIPOLARTWO
Dark word's are easier to write the easier cheerful one's. But if we don't write about the dark as well as the light we would be lying to ourselves. And i like what you wrote.......
kbrog
It fits for the time we are in. ;) Great poem! :)
brycek
Terrific poem, Randy!!
drifterlee
Very dark poen but cool!
adrie
Creepy dark writen poem Randy.
jocko500
cool story
wysiwig
This works on any number of levels, both political and religious. There are none so blind as those who will not see.
dakotabluemoon
Excellent work and words to doom and gloom.
mgtcs
Marvelous poem my friend, excellent theme, superbly done!
Merrylee
Mmmmmmmmmmm!!!!
velleman
Simply great! These lines are about us - poor human beings trying to survive in this absolutely alienated and hostile world. We pretend we cannot see things, we pretend we do not have voices..