Your Letters by vaggabondd

Writers • Romance • posted on May 05, 2012

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When it is quiet And I have time to myself I get your letters from my safe I keep them there Because they are my treasure They are full of gold and silver Diamonds and rubies I spread out felt to lay them on Being ever so careful not to tear them I randomly pick one out to read And it makes me want to close my eyes Pull you into my arms And dance with you in the wind Then I take another one out to read It makes me laugh so hard my sides ache Tears run down the side of my face Then I lock them back up In my special little place

Comments (15)

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Faemike55

6:27PM | Sat, 05 May 2012

Very good Randy! romantic as well

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drifterlee

6:36PM | Sat, 05 May 2012

So sweet and romantic, Randy!!!!!

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eekdog

9:13PM | Sat, 05 May 2012

very moving Randy..

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brewgirlca

11:14PM | Sat, 05 May 2012

This is wonderful poem Randy, very powerful and it evokes a clear image in my mind. If I may, I would like to suggest it stop five lines earlier. Everything up to that point evokes a defining place, a clear memory of past loves that you share with us to create a magical scene. We are invited to be observers of a moment and no more need be said to envision the depth of the bond.

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vaggabondd

11:47PM | Sat, 05 May 2012

Thank you my friend I do like it better without the last 5 lines. it reads smoother and it still brings across what I want to convey :)

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jayfar

1:22AM | Sun, 06 May 2012

Super poem.

angora

3:51AM | Sun, 06 May 2012

beautiful!!!

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dakotabluemoon

6:09AM | Sun, 06 May 2012

I like it just the way it is awesome stuff my friend and u are an inspirational writer.

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Merrylee

10:30AM | Sun, 06 May 2012

Excellent Randy and I agree with brewgirlca

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kbrog

11:49AM | Sun, 06 May 2012

Very romantic poem, beautifully done! :)

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jocko500

1:19PM | Sun, 06 May 2012

very lovely poem

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adrie

2:40PM | Sun, 06 May 2012

Beautiful romantic poem Randy.

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Isabelle711

9:57PM | Sun, 06 May 2012

Letters from the past just have a way of warming ones heart. :))) Reading about how careful you are with the letters makes me think you treat all relationships in your life just as carefully. :)))) Beautiful poem my friend. :)) Thank you for sharing. :)))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :)))

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