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Abandoned

Critique Work In Progress posted on Jun 01, 2012
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Just a hobby, no formal training. Working on my realism (to a degree). Trying to get better at natural looking renders. Thought this one came out decent. I can spot a few things but depends on who's looking at it and what they're looking for I guess. Critique desired. My friends aren't into digital art so I come to you for feedback. Modeling/Rendering : Maya (mental ray) Texturing/Post: Photoshop & Mudbox Wireframe: http://i1191.photobucket.com/albums/z480/zirome44/ABHouseGREY1.png

Comments (5)


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artrager

8:14PM | Fri, 01 June 2012

Decent indeed! Very impressive work!

zirome

8:20PM | Fri, 01 June 2012

Ty much. Appreciate it.

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shonsu

10:00PM | Fri, 01 June 2012

The texture work and modelling with the shack is very good. The landscape and background suit the subject but the trees are kind of detracting. I think if it were a different season where the trees had leaves, it might work.

zirome

10:16AM | Sat, 02 June 2012

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah those bare trees were iffy, I thought it was too boring without them but yeah, they look a tad out of place. Glad you like the texture work. Mudbox has done wonders for me in that respect. I'm horrible with UV mapping etc so I automatic map in Maya then hand paint on the models in Mudbox. I'll have to get good at UV's one day if I plan to animate though I think.

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datadraw1

11:11AM | Fri, 14 September 2012

Great work. I like the building, it would look good in a scene with rusted derelict vehicles and other old buildings or old farmhouse.


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