Evening Smoke by vaggabondd
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Description
Sitting on the back porch smoking
The cool evening breeze
Makes the smoke disappear
I look off into the woods
Where we use to play adult games
Hide n go seek
Which quickly turned into tag
And we were both it
I love games where everyone wins
But that was a long, long time ago
I don’t even know your new last name
Or where you live
But I do know you still cross my mind
When I close my eyes I can hear your laugh
See you dancing naked in the sunlight
You were so confident in your beauty
So unashamed
You belonged naked in the sunlight
The best part of my evening smoke
Is remembering you
Comments (10)
wizardofnoz
Very touching and emotive words!
kbrog
Wonderful and lovely poem! :)
adrie
Another beautiful writen poem.
Isabelle711
When playing such games the being tagged is the sweetest part. :))))) Games that include love are the very best. :)))))) Most touching and meaningful poem my friend. :))))) Most excellent in each and every way. :))))))) Thank you for sharing what you hold in your heart. :))))))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :))))
eekdog
well written Randy.
Faemike55
very beautiful and moving words Randy
brycek
Nice poem, Randy!!
galung
Beautiful photo...and thank you for your comment at my gallery.....:)
dakotabluemoon
This is different and interesting as to where a person would remember the best part of their life love it.
PREECHER
sadness...i can feel it and hurting from your words...i know it oh too well... beautiful poetry... chills and thrills