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Evening Smoke

Writers Romance posted on Jun 22, 2012
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Sitting on the back porch smoking The cool evening breeze Makes the smoke disappear I look off into the woods Where we use to play adult games Hide n go seek Which quickly turned into tag And we were both it I love games where everyone wins But that was a long, long time ago I don’t even know your new last name Or where you live But I do know you still cross my mind When I close my eyes I can hear your laugh See you dancing naked in the sunlight You were so confident in your beauty So unashamed You belonged naked in the sunlight The best part of my evening smoke Is remembering you

Comments (10)


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wizardofnoz

9:37AM | Fri, 22 June 2012

Very touching and emotive words!

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kbrog

12:43PM | Fri, 22 June 2012

Wonderful and lovely poem! :)

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adrie

2:06PM | Fri, 22 June 2012

Another beautiful writen poem.

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Isabelle711

4:42PM | Fri, 22 June 2012

When playing such games the being tagged is the sweetest part. :))))) Games that include love are the very best. :)))))) Most touching and meaningful poem my friend. :))))) Most excellent in each and every way. :))))))) Thank you for sharing what you hold in your heart. :))))))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :))))

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eekdog Online Now!

5:59PM | Fri, 22 June 2012

well written Randy.

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Faemike55

6:38PM | Fri, 22 June 2012

very beautiful and moving words Randy

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brycek

7:07PM | Fri, 22 June 2012

Nice poem, Randy!!

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galung

8:26PM | Fri, 22 June 2012

Beautiful photo...and thank you for your comment at my gallery.....:)

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dakotabluemoon

6:23AM | Sat, 23 June 2012

This is different and interesting as to where a person would remember the best part of their life love it.

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PREECHER

4:23PM | Sun, 24 June 2012

sadness...i can feel it and hurting from your words...i know it oh too well... beautiful poetry... chills and thrills


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