Good Point of View. I would have the lady looking at the same thing as the man or have the man looking at the lady or make the lady looking up at the man. I think if you turned her head out a little to go where the man is pointing and move her eyes a little to look in the same direction as him would be a great boon to the scene. Right now she kind of looks emotionless in her face compared to her body language. It's like he is saying here look and she is just staring at the ceiling. I would also maybe add some more lights. Maybe a colored one if you were going for sunset type lighting. I think it's great otherwise.