Aranée 72: The Trackless Tireless Sea by NetWorthy

Carrara/RDS • Story/Sequential • posted on Oct 01, 2012

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(ZOOM OR YOU'LL MISS DETAILS!) Hie to lands afar... Away, oh ships - Across tireless tide - O'er limpid brine glide - Ancient sea-rules abide To kiss - The watery lips - The watery lips Adjust loud straining spar... Dire freight inside - Misery abounding - Agony compounding - Fate confounding To conspire - E'er to hide - E'er to hide For riches hard a-port... Here, there, set chains - To strong man tall - To rare child small - To fair woman befall Tears gone - Nothing remains - Nothing remains Dolphins race for sport... Trackless seas uncertain - Under flags unflown - To lands unknown - Shiv'ring cargos groan Bring down - The stormy curtain - The stormy curtain Fetid nighttime fears... Sailor, stow guilty pain - Memory do thwart - Gossamer morals distort - Burden cargo to port Sad refrain - None to blame - None to blame All on the sea's deaf ears... --- TO BE CONTINUED! View episodes in sequence for the entire story, links below. Please leave a comment for I value your words and they well and truly fuel my creativity... Image and story © 2012 by Larry Hodge

Comments (23)

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Cimaira

3:26PM | Mon, 01 October 2012

Wonderful writing and excellent image to go with it. I love the pov and the sadness in her eyes tells so much.

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magnus073

4:16PM | Mon, 01 October 2012

Splendid work on both scene and story Larry, truly one of your best

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drifterlee

4:31PM | Mon, 01 October 2012

Fantastic work! Is she drowning?

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mgtcs

4:49PM | Mon, 01 October 2012

WOW...Such a original creation my friend, marvelous work and mood, gorgeous lighting and words! Thank you for sharing!

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Faemike55

5:16PM | Mon, 01 October 2012

This one got to me Excellent work

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Savage_dragon

6:00PM | Mon, 01 October 2012

Wow...........

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NetWorthy

6:20PM | Mon, 01 October 2012

No she is not drowning but has resigned herself to her fate, a fate in somebody else's hands. The only thing she can hang onto is that she is alive. This chapter/image is best understood in the context of what has already happened in the story - the clues are all there. The act of trying to make some sense of it will help you put the coming events into focus... I promise.

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TheOwl68

6:21PM | Mon, 01 October 2012

What Savage_dragon said....so emotional, magnificent writing and a stunning, dramatic scene! Bravo!

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mikeerson

6:34PM | Mon, 01 October 2012

I zoomed in... didn't see any detail that I didn't see at the regular size.

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bebopdlx

9:39PM | Mon, 01 October 2012

Nice work.

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spdskool

12:20AM | Tue, 02 October 2012

Nice work on the poem and pic!

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PhilW

2:13AM | Tue, 02 October 2012

Wonderful words and image as usual my friend, and very original, but I have to confess to being slightly confused as to how this fits with your story. I think you are being too subtle for us!

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