Beauty test shot 0001 by phryea

Photography • Work In Progress • posted on Oct 04, 2012

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Remember the model with the pretty smile? http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/index.php?image_id=2331848 Ok, so, this is her again, we worked together on making some beauty shots. This is nearly done, I see that I gotta work on the eyes, but I just felt....bleh, I like it as it is, you know? So, aside from the eyes, would anyone like to provide feedback for it? Be honest, I can handle criticism. It's hard because I gotta go for perfection, but I just feel...bleh, I can't explain it. lol And don't worry, there was no nudity, and she is over 18. I did nickname her "Jailbait" though. lol

Comments (7)

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kassad

2:36AM | Thu, 04 October 2012

Great shot. Nice model. Excellent. B->

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sharky_

11:42AM | Thu, 04 October 2012

She is beautiful... Glad you noticed the eyes. Aloha

MrsLubner

12:06PM | Thu, 04 October 2012

Just in case, keep her signed model release around. Some people may not feel like taking your word she's over 18. I think she's got a nice wholesome look and the light ring in the eyes is very nice. I would think that she would be nice in "artistic shots" more than sensual ones and the same effect could be achieved. Your lighting is very nice and the skin is well smoothed and fresh.

kr3n_al

3:38PM | Thu, 04 October 2012

Excelente

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TallPockets

3:39PM | Thu, 04 October 2012

"YOUTH" will almost ALWAYS offer a 'best' look .... T.P.

whaleman

2:29AM | Fri, 05 October 2012

I would have mentioned her eyes mainly because I dislike ring flashes but that's my personal preference and I realize many others do like them. I think the skin tones are excellent. The face could be turned a bit more towards the camera to avoid the eye sitting into the corner which does not work well with Asian eyes. Love the lighting on the hair too! Don't know why anyone would keep her model release around as it always contains private and confidential information which, once collected, must by law (here) be protected and secured. If anyone asked I would send them to ask the model but would never show them the release. I keep all my releases very secure and locked.

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