The Man Who Liked Fishes by FractalFactor
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Description
Hurting for the
cold dawn, pink ripples
cold fingers wet with
lake sheared from his thin line
Big Fish
Big Fish
following his daredevil retrieve
the nagging whine the singing
of his reel
figure eight at the side of the boat
a flash, a glimmer
he dreams he would
stand up in the boat
dive into the cold water
and become a fish
Comments (5)
Jennyfnf
Fine descriptive words and a fine transformation into a super fractal!
sharky_
Reminds me of a flying fish when we use to fish.... Aloha
LivingPixels
nicely done!!!
weezy136
Fantastic.
Chipka
Nice and succinct! I love the progression of this piece from its opening and what you suspect the actual poem might be about (and it is, to a degree) but the end takes a nice, unexpected turn. I like that and I like the straightforward manner in which the poem reveals itself. It's quite elegant. I love the accompanying image.