heretic by nun2brite
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They'd locked him away, no food, no water, no light.
With a chip of stone he tore at the doors egde, door frame around the lock.
It eventually poped open, he crawled out, his parched lips cracking in a smile.
Praise the light his heart sang, he was free, his right hand on the wall.
He was fearful of falling so he crawled, and crawled, finallly he came to a left turn and he crawled.
He came to a closed door, so weak, fear of it being locked choked him.
Praise the light a single salty tear slipped down his face.
An empty room... he was so....tired, but he continued on.
He never realised his jailors bricked up the tunnel.
Comments (9)
Cimaira
Wow, great story and wonderful image!
GrandmaT Online Now!
Excellent work!
Faemike55
very powerful
teecee2107
Great image, creating an oppressive feel !
webdancer
Great story, great scene! Excellent work on both!
bebopdlx
Nice work here, cool story also.
barryjeffer
You were channeling Poe as you wrote this... beautiful words and image.
renecyberdoc
a claustrophobic feeling overcame me while reading.well done
ia-du-lin
great scene, atmo and mats!