Millworker II by Orinoor
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I rarely redo an image, but my Millworker scene was quite labor intensive and I was never that happy with it, so I spent a couple of days and think I've greatly improved the overall composition and lighting. Hope you agree, but let me know either way, I always love hearing what you have to say. Thanks!
Comments (24)
Faemike55
The lighting is excellent and her pose & expression are perfect for someone who has been at the 'machine' for a long time
EricofSD
Very nice. Yup, lots of hard work there.
adorety
I still like the composiion of the original as well. But this is a beautiful improvement. Closer in and the lighting is excellent for color and detail. The hazy lighting of the other works on its own level too. A beautiful re-do.
brewgirlca
While this one has greater shadow depth I have to admit I prefer the composition of the first one. Having her gazing outside a window where you can see a bit of the street leaves no doubt she is stuck inside. Also in the former she is looking across a lot more of her inner space, which again forces one to feel for her confinement and is a method often used in occupational genre photography to tie a subject to their environment.
phey
Her gaze seems to show she is half lost in a dream of being someplace else. The lighting is good and gives good contrast and the shadows have a good softness to them. All in all very nicely done.
rbowen
Excellent!
0rest4wicked
Fantastic realism!
castaneda
Wonderful. The expression is congruent with the environment. The angst of lost hopes and dreams. Great lighting and detail.
Kalypso Online Now!
Very well done, the lighting is spot on but as for the composition I have to agree with brewgirlca, I prefer the first one.
ragouc
Good light and scene. Well done.
odile
Superb! Very realistic!
Roywig
Excellent! I can see you put a lot of work into this image.
teecee2107
The mood, the atmosphere is excellent and the lighting is perfect.
3dpoetry
Awesome work
tulipe
Excellent scene!
kits
This is excellent, I love her expression, that faraway look is terrific but I prefer the composition of your first one, I think the light in front of her head detracts a little from this one, but the lighting and soft shadows are superb, great job :)
bigbraader
Moody and beautiful :)
Umbetro38
wonderful to look at and presents excellent
jclP
Nice render, and ligthing
sigung
Pardon me for expressing a wee preference, just remember that honest critique is the hallmark of respect. I like the composition of the first one better, but I like the lighting and details added to this one as well. I think you should do another one and combine the best of both of them. Your work is superb on every level.
Naneth36
I agree with adorety, brewgirlca and sigung. I think view from the window at her left was an important element of the layout. But, of course, it's a very subjective opinion.
loligagger
Great job with this image also!!!!
Flint_Hawk
This has excellent detail & I prefer the color, but I must confess that the first version does give me more of a sense of her emotions & longing!
Steeleyes101
Beyound workds. Just Beautiful!