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Description
Tired of hearing
You care about what souls think
And all I can say is
Is not really
I care about feelings
Of others as should
Cause I know pain
How it can crumble to no end
Desperately seeking right
©17 November 2012 LKS
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words come to mind
sometimes that is all it is....words
thank you so much
for the smiles
Comments (12)
lyron
Fantastic work!!
Amarillis
Love the abstraction and juxtaposition of colors. Its lovely
Faemike55
Very cool work and touching poem
peedy
Fantastic image! Gorgeous coloring and lighting. Corrie
neoexcello
Trippy image and righteous verse.
wysiwig
Nice abstraction and mix of colors. Your poem speaks to me. Empathy seems in short supply these days.
Tripper
brilliant
MagikUnicorn
TRIPPY
auntietk
Your image speaks to me of someone "flying off in all directions" or "falling apart at the seams." Having held on absolutely as long as they can, everything tilts and blows up and gets away from them in the end and it all falls apart. Lack of emotional and mental cohesion. It's a powerful piece, and this is a perfect example of how art and viewer interact to create a unique experience! I'm sure you're not feeling that way (or you wouldn't be creating visual art and writing poetry) ... there's nothing about this that says "self portrait" ... but the impression lingers. I like your poem, too, and it gives me the exact opposite impression from the image. Your words sound very sure and grounded and clear. Really good stuff!
cricke49
awesome render linda, excellent verse to go with it, words are words with or without feelings!:) warm smiles and hug!:)*5
Eleandras
Awesome image!
KnightWolverine
When a hug is needed one is given....here you go....(((((((HUG)))))))) ~Smiles~