Alpha Strike by Gameforce

DAZ|Studio • Work In Progress • posted on Nov 27, 2012

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Description

Here is a work in progress for a friend who is opening up a gaming center. I feel like it's missing something and so suggestions are greatly appreciated. The gaming center will mostly cater to Magic the Gathering items and games.

Comments (6)

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brewgirlca

10:32PM | Tue, 27 November 2012

Some suggestions: "Strike" needs to be a bolder gold so the S and E pop from the frame. If it's a strike that is important you need to show it. Put the characters in motion/attacking and/or have some flames/pyrotechnic explosions as the backdrop rather than the pure white. Characters expressions should look like they are engaged in combat and not posing for a portrait. They need to look more like warriors and not just models in armour.

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Razor42

10:33PM | Tue, 27 November 2012

Looks pretty cool, Small suggestion maybe place the characters behind the text panel and then enlarge the text panel slightly to make the text a stronger element in the design. Cool work though :)

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tigertim

2:36PM | Wed, 28 November 2012

looks pretty cool.. have to agree that the S and E of strike get lost in the gold ring.. so maybe a change of colour, and the right charcater needs a more agressive stance to match the lady on the left!..an excelletn graphic!

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Gameforce

3:42PM | Wed, 28 November 2012

Thanks for everyone's feedback - greatly appreciated and exactly what I needed. Back to work on it :)

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