I Had A Daydream by vaggabondd
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I had a daydream yesterday
And you were in it
We were standing on a bluff
Overlooking the great river
Fall was in the air
Our cheeks were a glow
From the crisp wind
I had one hand on the small of your back
The other hand laced in your hand
There was no music
But round and round we danced
We were so close when you spoke
I could feel your breath against my lips
You were talking
But I couldn’t hear a word
All I could think was
If I steal a kiss
Will this dance end
Comments (17)
eekdog Online Now!
well wriiten my friend..
jayfar
Nice poem but very disappointed that there is no image after seeing the beautiful thumbnail.
bobrgallegos
Very beautiful poem!
Merrylee
Love it...
brycek
Beautiful Randy!!
Faemike55
Beautiful writing Randy
Isabelle711
This daydream speaks affection and love. :))))) My friend you have touched a heart today. :)))) Most sweetly written poem. :)))) Keep sharing the beautiful gift you are blessed with. :)))) Most excellent in each and every way. :))))) Carry A Smile In Your Heart :)))))
drifterlee
Very romantic peom, Randy!!!!!!
adrie
Beautiful and romantic writen poem dear Randy.
Nonsolum
You've got the words for any soul my friend...
wysiwig
In dreams all things are possible. Beautiful words. That thumbnail deserves its own post.
dakotabluemoon
Well u got the one part right a man never hears what the woman say's lol but another wonderful piece of writing.
velleman
Very idyllic and exalting, great lines!
ragouc
Nice poem.
Shaylea
Beautiful poem!
giovanino
Lovely work
Darkwish
You did very nice poem!