Going Up..(Mechanic) by barryjeffer
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Description
Something changed... the walls seemed to shimmer. The picture, box top and whatever else
had been laying on the floor became hazy, as if turning to sparkling particles, and disappeared falling through the concrete floor. His breathing had changed as well, now coming in shallow fast gasps as the walls began to do the same thing, revealing a darkness behind them. No,
it was more than darkness, it was a nothingness. He could feel the void that filled the
blackness there and it terrified him in a primal way that he had never felt before. It was
as if a gaping maw had opened and wanted no more than to devour him completely.
Jumping to his feet, Deschain backed away from the encroaching shadow. He stopped only when
he felt the cool cement wall against his back.. he was trembling as he slowly turned, hoping
the wall behind him was still intact and the door remained where he had entered. The wall
indeed was there, but it too had changed. To his amazement what had been a simple cement wall
and rusty door had been replaced. There in that place was a set of shiny metal elevator doors.
The wall now marbled stone was ultra-modern and polished to perfection. He stood, dumbfounded
for a moment, not daring to look behind him, fearing the impending doom would swallow him
whole at any moment. He had no time to think, only to react. He reached his right hand out and
pressed the up button on the chrome panel.
The recorded female was pleasant "Going up Mr. Deschain"... the sound was sweet, but out of
place here in the growing void. He could feel the darkness coming nearer, the floor falling
into nothingness just behind his feet. He leaped though the opening before the doors had
fully slid apart, falling against the back wall and to the carpeted floor. There was nothing outside the small elevator, nothing but black, yet there was a dread that permeated that emptiness that scared him to his core. The silence was broken by the "ding" as the door glided shut, followed by the same disembodied voice as outside.. "What floor today Mr. Deschain"?
"What floor...floor, what the hell was happening", his mind was screaming. The word blurted out before he thought about it. "The top" he yelled. Instantly the car jerked into motion. He rose, shaking to his feet, trying to make any sense of this nonsensical situation. With the passing of each floor, a small red light was emitted onto the car's steel surface followed by a faint "ding"... "two, three...four. " the voice chimed until reaching the
tenth landing.. The movement slowed and stopped. "Tenth floor Mr. Deschain, all out and thank you for visiting, come again". This time the voice was different, deeper almost menacing in it's tone. He could feel the snicker behind that voice... and it made his knees weak. The doors began to open, the light poured in, bright white it hurt his eyes to look into it.. he could only stand there waiting for his vision to return to normal. He gripped the edges of the doors, steadying himself, bracing for whatever was hidden in the haze of that damned light.
"Hey, hurry up", the words boomed in the mechanics ears... "he's coming around, look his eyes are moving" The sounds came from above him, but his eyes couldn't make out anything except the hazy gray shadows within the brilliance. He flinched and gripped the doors tighter, waiting for the unknown...
Comments (49)
GrandmaT
Excellent!
Savage_dragon
Cool work. ")
adrie
Great work on this image that is going with the story Seth, superb done...love it.
Tracesl
Excellent
theprojectionist
Great Story Seth.
munich68
POOOH! Strong stuff..... but excellent done!!
adorety
Excellent continuation. The storyline really draws you in. Excellent matching image.
Richardphotos
creepy scenario and superb illustration
RodS Online Now!
Well, I'm on the edge of my seat..... Excellent art and storyline, Seth! More, more...
UteBigSmile
♥ Freaking! http://www.reocities.com/Paris/Bistro/2859/Faith.html
artistheat
Great Image and Work
LBJ2
Great render and story, Seth. The lightset really adds to the atmosphere in this one.+5
Lunamoon
Oh..this is fantastic, utterly brilliant. The story really draws you in, it's breathtaking! You are so very talented, this could be a book, it's so well written. And the accompanying pictures are really awesome..I'm loving this series! OXOXOXOX Jane
Navi
Nice picture and novel Seth :)
ZanderXL
I like the symbolism. He goes up in the elevator as he "rises" to consciousness. Nicely done, Seth.
donnena
VERY cool story!!! MORE!!!!!! cool render, too!!
Heitaikai
An excellent scene, I love the lighting!
crunch01
story and image your usual "great!"
Tholian
Well, well. Seems that I have stepped into the middle of a story. I'll have to check out the rest if it exists. Render ON!