Words by hipps13
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The shine
Out of your smile
Where did it go?
With years went
______________________
Troubled mind
Wondered thoughts
Said what heard
Right
Wrong
Who is to speak?
______________________
Been using my heart with my mind
Instead of my mind with my heart
A big difference
The been learning a lot
A lot with my mind trying to open
The whole picture that it sees
In the eyes that are the soul
Can tell how it feels
_______________________
Hear my tears
As love in my heart
Will never die
_______________________
Quality of life
An answer that most
Never really see
_____________________
For a little while longer
Just a bit of time more
Let be in God
For his hands to take
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Old Shoe House DAZ 3D
Victoria DAZ 3D
©March 31, 2013 LKS
Comments (16)
Faemike55
the image is very cool your poems are very powerful and touching
auntietk
Pascal said The heart has its reasons of which reason knows nothing and I'm sure it's true. Balance is where it's at. (It's always good to see you my friend ... it does my heart good.)
peedy
Gorgeous image! Love the bubbles at the feet. Corrie
MagikUnicorn
Beauty
wysiwig
The heart will have its way, even in the face of reason. A very powerful and emotional poem. And your flooded image, half seen, half hidden. Always thought provoking. I hope you are well.
mgtcs
Very, very beautiful and emotional poem indeed Linda, marvelous image, fantastic work!
Leije
Surrealistic image, the reflects are superb !
artofsouls
Cool work
cricke49
outstanding image render Linda, and as always a very uplifting verse to go along with it! big smiles and hugs!:)*5
Eleandras
Beautiful!
tryky5carla
Excellent scene, great reflection !!! And beautiful "words" , gorgeous work !!!!!
GrandmaT
Wonderful work!
crunch01
truely fantasic! :o)
Celart
Great idea and realization
e-brink
A very strong image and words. I've been doing some poetry interpretations with film on my YouTube channel in the last year.
ansgar2
FANTASTIC...!!!