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Writers Challenge posted on May 18, 2013
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A picture Of my son In his middle school Uniform Cold blue eyes And a slight Sneer His words As he handed me His school picture She said I couldn't leave Until I Smiled A moment Of sympathy For a harassed Photographer Before I Couldn't stop Laughing A picture Of my son Cold blue eyes A slight sneer When I see it I always Smile ............................... I couldn't really think of anything for the Writer's Gallery Topic for May (SMILE), until I read Tara's (auntietk) very funny poem. Then I remembered a picture and another reaction to a request to smile. I'm going to Seattle on Monday with my mom to visit my son for a week. My niece Kate, is going to join us there. A wonderful week to everyone!

Comments (22)


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flavia49

5:01PM | Sat, 18 May 2013

very lovely poem

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Faemike55

5:13PM | Sat, 18 May 2013

Great picture and cool writing have fun in Seattle

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auntietk

6:19PM | Sat, 18 May 2013

What a great story! I'm glad my poem gave your brain the little bump it needed ... this is delightful! I wish I wish I wish I weren't on the road right now ... I'd LOVE to be home next week so I could see you!!!

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magnus073

6:29PM | Sat, 18 May 2013

Lucinda, This is a wonderful photo of your son and I very much enjoyed the story. Have a great time in Seattle

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Cyve

6:46PM | Sat, 18 May 2013

Fantastic work and great poeme !

ronmolina

7:21PM | Sat, 18 May 2013

Lovely indeed!

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mgtcs

10:45PM | Sat, 18 May 2013

This is an amazing poem and capture dear Lucinda, very well composed, impressive work! Congratulations!

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durleybeachbum

11:46PM | Sat, 18 May 2013

Wonderful! I have a very similar phot of my son at that age... Maybe he had a similar experience.

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wysiwig

12:57AM | Sun, 19 May 2013

What a wonderful memory. Its the small moments that make a life. Thank you for sharing this. I hope you have the best time in Seattle. Its a great place.

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jayfar

1:02AM | Sun, 19 May 2013

Obviously an academic! Nice picture and words Lucinda.

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jendellas

8:01AM | Sun, 19 May 2013

Love it, I hate having my pic taken & I am like that :o) Have a super week. xxx

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clbsmiley

8:45AM | Sun, 19 May 2013

Great memory. Have a great trip and visit!

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sandra46

5:48PM | Sun, 19 May 2013

WONDERFUL WORK!

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jocko500

6:29PM | Sun, 19 May 2013

got to smile. cool image here

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Minda

9:49PM | Sun, 19 May 2013

Great picture and nice writing lucinda..safe trip.

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Chipka

10:04PM | Sun, 19 May 2013

Great image and great poem, and of course the poem itself is a great image in and of itself. It so concise and rich in telling details. I think "Smile" is one of the best challenges to come up, and they've all been good, but I think this one has really opened up all sorts of different possibilities, since smiles are a gesture that comes as a response to so many different things, including photographers who are hard-pressed to make photographs for yearbooks and such things. I love the way you weave so much into this image: observation, emotion, commentary: it blends together perfectly and has an excellent "cover image" to illustrate it. Super work! I hope Seattle is fun! I know it will be, and I gotta head out thataway at some point myself. I really like this, and I love the fact that you've posted it here.

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KatesFriend

10:31PM | Mon, 20 May 2013

I've never had problems smiling for school photos. Anything to get us out of class for 30mins was greatly anticipated and we were grateful. I mean really, the life cycle of the avocado? No wonder so many kids abandon science before grade 9. A lovely slice of life Lucinda. But I must say, because I so remember how it was to be that age, your response is so typically adult. My mother is one such as you. That's right, laugh at my trials mom. Of coarse, now my wife does too - there is no escape. Okay, I'll admit it, I've been drinking. But I must admit, that's a great photo and I'd hold on to it too. Have a great trip.

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drifterlee

12:41PM | Tue, 21 May 2013

Wonderful poem and shot!

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emmecielle

2:58PM | Tue, 21 May 2013

Very nice poem! :)

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anianiani

8:51AM | Sat, 25 May 2013

Loved all about this...Great.

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blondeblurr

8:21PM | Sun, 09 June 2013

I just knew it - I had missed one, no, not to smile - here is mine ;) (but one of your posts, oops!) but then again, I am not a good writer, nor poet - I wouldn't know, where to start? I am agreeing with Tara, by saying: I wish, I wish, I wish ... I wish I could write poetry, yeah dream on! anyhow, I think boys will be boys, they don't have to smile, like girls do - only when the right one comes along ;))) The week, you have been away in Seattle, has come and gone by now and I hope it was all good and fine ... BB PS I am so glad, that you responded and succeeded to my Moon greeting ;) and thank you very much for the wonderful words you had left on my little dedi for you, you are a master with words, because you do look deeper than most ;)

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danapommet

9:24PM | Mon, 05 August 2013

I didn't like my photo taken either and really still don't and that is why my avatar is 49 years old! Nice photo being in a special spot and I love your poem!


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