TGA Page 22 by Prof_Null
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Description
Technical problems this week slowed progress, so here is three pages all at once.
Special thanks to Halcyone for M4 Casual wear set, you can see it on Mr. Frack: it's the only shirt I have seen for M4 that has the shoulders morphed to a realistic shape.
Comments (5)
Xfitz
I wish you would begin each page with a small yellow window like they do in comics that says something like: "meanwhile back at planet headquarters [character's name] addresses the supreme council." If not that then perhaps in the notes section remind the reader where we are in the plot. It is a bit difficult to follow the story line since obviously there are several days between posting pages (usually). Otherwise, no criticisms. I am enjoying the tale.
drifterlee
Wonderful work!
DRAKELOT
Xcellent images
Prof_Null
Xfitz, thankyou for your comment: I will add some intro boxes but really the whole thing is designed to be read as a comic, it just takes time to make the pages. At the moment I plan to print it on paper so the layout is designed for that: if it was to be electronic I would probably just make single images each page.
GrandmaT
I like it!