Rocky Plateau - Experiment by mwkloh
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Description
Created in Vue with some postwork in Photoshop. Experimenting with different landscapes for future compositions. Tried putting in some dragons but the final picture did not look right..:( Something seems to be missing in this piece but cannot put my hand on it. Comments and suggestions for improvement greatly appreciated!
Comments (6)
thomaskrahn
What an extraordinary render! Nice to see something new in here... The only thing i believe is missing would be some persons so you could get a sence of scale.
artistheat
Great scene,excellent work
Heart'Song
I like it a lot so far. Great shapes and textures
stealthman
Not only a beautiful scene and composition - but a great sense of depth as well. Great job!
gnurf
You asked for suggestions and comments: I think this is a great scene, but I would change two things 1) the 'middle' dry grass of the three looks funny, like it is tipped over a bit. 2) the ground in the forground looks like a carpet. I would add more dirt and grit and perhaps some small rocks, or I would change it to sand. Excellent composition.
willbrown
The large rock and moon in the background are so close to center they create a static feeling. Try moving them right or left. A circle will always act as a focus so be careful. Use it only in a centered position if you wish to elicit a peaceful mood. Also the easiest trick for creating dynamic motion is to tilt the horizon a few degrees.