Danger by frezzic
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Bad and/or constructive critics are most welcome to improve work.
(a long list of credits will come)
According to your comments, I agree with you all. Maybe I'll remake this composition later (poses and lights).
Thank you all.
Comments (7)
verbumdomini
what a strange picture
MarkBremmer
Nice start. Just my opinion: There are too many lighting areas with equal intensity making it hard to know where to look (equal brightness). Plan the image in a 1, 2, 3 etc. method of what you want the viewer to see and in what order. Then construct the lighting intensity accordingly. Images where viewers 'discover' things are more fun to look at. :D
MarkBremmer
...and yes, I saw the "danger" but backlighting may work better for that. Just the crazed ravings of a lunatic madman...
frezzic
Thank you for your opinion. I love opinions. I agree with you, there's a lack of drama in the scene because of the lighting. I will try (one day) to re-light it according your comment to render a more dramatic image. Thanx again.
giulband
cool work !!
GrandmaT
Well done!
PhilW
There are some nice aspects to this image, but I can't work out the story - and the foreground male figure almost appears to have been added in later, he does not look part of the scene. If you can work out in your own mind what is happening, that will translate into the image and give it more purpose.
Henchmonkey
The posing on the male figures works really well. The V4, not so much. It's a nice pose and the character is attractive, but it's too "fashion catwalk" for the scene. I agree with the others. Nice start, though.
frezzic
I agree too. Thanks anyway.
1971s
Beautiful work!