Nice image, but if I may say so, her breasts are too large, she is starring, there is no expression in her face and what does she do with those two swords in the woods. I think you can improve this image by some more explanation of what you will show us. I know, I know, you are new here and I don't want to scare you away. But If I call out:"Beautiful" or "amazing", you don't learn anything. Don't be disappointed now, I had to learn it too and I still do. Keep on posting and above all enjoy your artwork.

Of course, I guess I just threw this one together to see if I could match the lighting in the woods. Not my best render by a long shot lol. It far longer to render than it did for me to work on. As for her proportions, still working on that. In my book she's described as having the body of a comic book heroine (there is actually a big reason behind why she looks the way she does beleive it or not lol). There is also something about that shirt that makes them look huge lmao. I just wish baggy shrits were easier to find. That's what I'd use if I had it.

It is opinion of mine that because he is new in Renderosity and not knowing his age, it would be preferable not to express so hard comment. For me it looks a nice picture my friend!!!!!Bravissimo!V:DDD.Hugsxx Whylma

I'm not so easily dissuaded Mondwin. And I'm probably older than you think (33 and it took me a moment to remember lol) I appreicate any type of feedback. One reason I post here is because deviant art is so big most works get ignore unless they are spectacular. Also people are acustom to CG art, especially using the tools I use. Now if I was only good at post work, I'd be set!