Nice job!!! Great Bio!!! Keep up the good work, though you really need to consider letting some of the info about your characters come out in a story. It's neat having all this info about someone, but unless you're working on a HUGE graphic novel that we know nothing about, the characters just fade away with no interaction. Quite honestly, I'd have to go to your gallery to look up her twin sister again because I don't remember her. ...if you've even posted her yet! The reader needs to become invested in the characters through a story line that either evokes thoughts and emotions for or against a character. Good Characters can be bad while bad characters can be good depending on the circumstances! Your readers never get involved in your world the way that it's being done now. I don't want to tell you your business, but those are just my thoughts. You have such wonderful ideas and a great imagination. Do the story!!! You've already got a cast of characters!!! Let your readers know what you see in your imagination through the story! :) 5+++

I've posted her sister yesterday, and I have been doing an ongoing web comic. I have to admit that this site isn't exactly the best place for showing all of my character bios or even the pages of the comics, and honestly it's just one of many places that I do post all of this with several of the others being much better to showcase my work, but I post here all the same to get the most exposure that I can. The character bios are indeed supposed to just be supplemental to actually involving the characters in the actual stories that I will one day make for all of them. There is no difference to what I am doing that what Marvel or DC has done with their universal handbook guides. Just think of all of these character bios as sneak peaks into the faces of my universe. I truly understand that no one will probably remember half of them, and I can't show them all at once in my comics, but when I do, they will be in all of my various galleries wherever I post this stuff for readers to look back upon to get a better feel for who they all are. Everything that I have done so far is a work in progress that I have been doing for years, but haven't had the time or technology to share until the last several years when I began posting online, and will continue to be so as I honestly have just begun to scratch the surface of everything. As noted above, this site isn't exactly the best for showcasing my work with it's one post a day restrictions and lack of structure in the galleries, which is why it's really just a bit of extra exposure for me and not much more, but I will continue to post here all the same as every little bit helps.