For a Challenge by ontar1
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An alarm ripped through the silent darkness.
It took but a second for my mind to register the noise and then the voice yelled, “This is not a drill”! Oh crap, I said as crawled out of the lower berthing and opened my locker. Grabbing the first items on top and my boots I started dressing! “Not a drill” kept echoing in my mind as I ran from my quarters on the third deck to the hanger bay and headed aft hoping to make it my shop on the 03 level and the last compartment at the stern. Dodging the aircraft and the tie down snakes I finally made it to the shop, fully dress and in less than three minutes when they started sealing the ship up. I stood there amazed, I didn't think I could move that quick.
Well finally got it done. Hope you enjoy.
Rick
Comments (11)
jendellas
Way to go, superb. I am still thinking. xx
eekdog
i have no image for viewing my friend, just a white box with a red x in it. cool short story.
Sarahdar
Same here eekdog, just an x
Raages
Me too Rick.
Staticon
I can see no image, either. :-( But it is an excellent short story. These single paragraph stories are becoming quite popular these days.
brycek
Super short story!!
Wolfenshire Online Now!
An excellent completion of the writing prompt challenge. I could feel the excitement and the adrenaline as the crew member rushed to his battle station. You conveyed very clearly where we were and what was happening in the opening paragraph. I think you have a talent for writing. Of course, you have already showed that in the Ontar series.
Wolfenshire Online Now!
I don't think a lot of people realize you don't have to use an image in Writer's Gallery.
Windigo
A great contribution to the writers challenge! Well done!
UteBigSmile
Super short story!!
ACue
Image is missing!!
KRYKOS
Interesting, it leaves me wanting more! Nice work!