Freeze! by romangirl
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Description
To make a (too) long story short.....
The Evil Trucker had abducted Sue from her husband's island, and brought her to "Snuffin' Smith, who has forced her to perform against her will in his highly illegal video.
Smith is very excited, because in the final scene, Sue is awakened by the front door bell early in the morning, and comes down the stairs to answer the door. What was to happen next would end the video.
But as the front door is about to open, another door, not connected to the movie, is smashed open.....
Police point their guns at Tony and his crew....
"Freeze!"
And they do!
Comments (12)
eekdog Online Now!
good job on that short story, image is perfect for it.
Miwekhy Online Now!
Good ending and unexpected final scene for "Snuffin" Smith. The hero came at the right moment, I think he desserves a good reward... Good news for the bad guys, Sue is back, but Manuel should be more careful, next time he plans to rent her wife to a pervert!
Jean_C
A happy end ? I think it is a good idea! Very nice scenes, superb work!
Leije
An unexpected end ! great work, Sue !
Windigo
Excellent, now she can find a way to get into even more trouble, if that's possible :)
Rock69
I wouldn't say the story is too long ... but I like this episode! Best wishes for Sue!! ;-)))
Mulltipass
Fantastic Work!!!
mtdana
Good story ending - Sue is safe!!!
magnus073
Nice work on this dramatic chapter in this series, Sue.
Egoak
Great image and story...
Crudelitas
Ah! Now Sue is safe! I find the story very interesting. I always feverish with, when it comes, that she can be reunited happily with her husband.
skyvendik
It's very interesting concept combine rendered image with text story. Good idea for me for future. Well done!