Bad Spirits, they exist by dochtersions

Writers • Creatures • posted on Nov 04, 2015

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Hello dear friends, This is a fractal that I had made, to put in the writers block of the Halloween challenge. But I was just a few hours to late with my contribution. So yet I put it here. I hope you find it no objection, that again another kind of ghost haunts here. My writing to it: Dark en sinister the dangerous whisper Smog is the place but not to be in. Nothing to win cold against the skin gloomy all in penetrant the smell pervasive in hell. Totally lost alone feeling frost cold all bones creepy all sounds no way I see dark holes around me. Bad spirits they exist! During Halloween there is no limit. Endlessly is their list. Thank you very much!

Comments (14)

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anahata.c

5:18PM | Wed, 04 November 2015

(when I was here before, there was no comment box, glad it's here now!) Your poem evokes spooky lurking scary things that hang around on Halloween. And I can see them in your image...but I have to say, I find your image to be beautiful! I mean, maybe there's beauty in sinister creepy things (maybe this is the "inner" creepy creature), but you have to know, this is beautiful. There's even a bunch of drawing-like lines here, like you printed your fractal and drew over it---those draping lines over some of the light-beams. And some kind of figure in the upper right quarter of the image---a rich array of figures, beings, energies. In the back, we can see a real creepy thing, like the ghost-of-a-lobster having a temper tantrum. And maybe a dragon too. But it's beautiful all the same; and if this is what sinister creatures look like---they can have dinner at my place anytime. I think you are so innate at creating lush beauty, you can't create a horrible image if you try. Another beautiful image from you.

And---since this is the Writers gallery---a very fine use of rhyme in couplets, triplets, sometimes in alternating lines...sinister/whisper, win /skin /in, sounds/see/around...alliteration (penetrant/pervasive...cold/creepy...) You express all these creatures in little breaths (short succinct lines), and it's very effective, and fun. (Even "bones" and "holes"---not end rhyme, but still the "o" sound...very nicely woven, Mies!)

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bugsnouveau

6:03PM | Wed, 04 November 2015

Very beautiful work

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MrsRatbag

7:56PM | Wed, 04 November 2015

Wow, this is so complex and so incredibly lovely!

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durleybeachbum

1:20AM | Thu, 05 November 2015

Brilliant ! The image is complex and exciting, and as you know I am in awe of your ability to write poetry in a second language !

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farmerC

4:05AM | Thu, 05 November 2015

Prachtig werk.

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VDH

8:00AM | Thu, 05 November 2015

Mooie, kleurrijke creatie!

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Cyve

10:08AM | Thu, 05 November 2015

ABsolutely fabulous my friend... WOnderfully done once again !!!

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jmb007

10:54AM | Thu, 05 November 2015

belle image

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emmecielle

12:19PM | Thu, 05 November 2015

Fantastic image, Mies! A big hug! :)

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auntietk

5:17PM | Thu, 05 November 2015

Your image gives me the sense of the dichotomy of good against evil, light against dark. It has such flow and swirl and motion, and I love it!

The poem you wrote to go with it gives such a sense of foreboding, of sinister intentions. The cold, clammy, uncomfortable feeling of things not being right. AND it's not in your first language!! So well done, dear friend. :)

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