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Girls From T.N.A: Breitlenger Jar: Ch 5 P 24

Digital Comics Story/Sequential posted on Feb 08, 2016
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Here's page 24 for your viewing pleasure as the briefing in Betty's lab continues. This case is getting bigger than anyone had expected (including me! LOL). Now, on to the next page. We will soon re-join Ar and G4 as they begin wrapping things up in DC, and have a meeting with someone at a very well-known address..... Without providing any spoilers, things are about to become VERY interesting. There will be a few side-stories coming up that will all tie together in Chapter 6. I know I've said this before, but........ fasten your seat-belts, folks.... Chapter 6 is gonna be a wild ride. I have several things in progress that I'm hoping to get posted soon. I'll also be continuing the T.N.A. Nouveau series - look for lots of the T.N.A. ladies - and friends - coming soon! Things here are beginning to level out a bit, and are slowly returning to something remotely resembling normal (whatever "normal" is...). We got our new oven delivered last week, and it's working fine. A new breaker was installed in the electrical panel. I'll probably wait until spring to have the electrical panels replaced. And, no.... I still haven't rebuilt this computer. That will also probably wait until spring. Well, enough rambling! Enjoy the latest page, and look for more soon! As always, thanks so much for dropping by and for all your great comments! I appreciate it more than I can put into words! Credits: fabiana: Druscilla Goth, KiriTe Hair, Twin Fair Hair Vyktohria: Betty for V4-G4 Rpublishing: Victress Hair V4A4G4 Mairy: Selene Hair 3D-Age: Police Uniform 2 Exnem: Killer catsuit Darkworld: Director's cut 2 Mapps – Richardphotos: HC 12 Secret Govenment Lab Goldtassel: Brooke Hair SWAM: Harmony Hair Melanie's tablet by 2nd World Ranpha, Trish and Rico by Diemamker (Dan) - Thanks for letting your lovely ladies be part of the adventure, buddy! Various monitors are 3DS files from Archive3D.net with screen graphics by me.

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Savage_dragon

12:25PM | Sat, 13 February 2016

Back for a minute. Had to stop by and see what the girls were up to. Missed ya', buddy. Looks great, as always. 😃

RodS

1:59PM | Sat, 13 February 2016

Miss you, too, sweetie! Hope you feel better soon! Big HUGS and get-well wishes coming your way from T.N.A. Headquarters! 😄

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auntietk

3:00PM | Wed, 17 February 2016

Whoa ... sorry to be so late! I haven't been checking in regularly. If you think I've missed something, send me a note and hit me over the head! LOL! I'm on the edge of my seat for the next installment!

SO glad you got the stove replaced and a new breaker in! That electricity stuff ain't nothin' to mess with, ya know what I mean? :P

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anahata.c

9:40PM | Wed, 20 April 2016

Well first of all, I haven't followed everything prior, so I'm not as up on the longer storyline as many of your other fans are. But I definitely know most of the characters, and I know something potentially very dangerous is unfolding here with Snowzem. (Does that name have anything in common with Snowden?) And I know this is headed to some heavy stuff down the road. Your storyline of increasing intrigue and suspicion over just what Snowzem is doing with those files, and who's getting them, is gripping. As is the string of dead animals and other bad signs that are building up. You leave us with a solid cliff-hanger, as you often do.

But then I gotta comment on your layout, your visuals, the way you handle text, etc. How the hell do you do this and not lose your mind? When I have projects with more than 2 or 3 elements, I call in sick. (So to speak.) You're managing a TON here. I look at all your screens alone: Man, you gotta go through a lot of photos and charts, etc, to pick the ones that suit each frame or each installment. And such fascinating, full choices! I love the aerial views of airports and roads and inlets. And the more data-oriented ones. (I remember book called "The Visualization of Data," something like that.) And imposing your signs over these photos ("Plum Island something Disease Center"---something like that ((it's blurred)) ). The pipe on the beach, the castle, the DNA-like 3D graphic, or those graphic screens that look like air-controller screens, and the dead animal. You have to do a lot of research for this; or know how to make your way through lots of digital files. And then there are the objects---the boards (I did musical production, so mixing boards come to mind), those great tablet-like screens on the desk, the lamps, that mug "Keep calm and fly a drone"...and then there are the outfits in various angles and lighting, because you have 5 frames and you want to show off the outfits like a fashion designer. Which you do. And all the angles and outfits look great---not a side point by any means!

And the room angles. And the text. I wonder if you ever want to scream at the text bubbles for getting in the way. But they don't---I assume that, after enough time at this art, you know where to place them. (Partial transparency helps a lot too.) You even took the 'thought' bubble---"What in the world??"---and put it behind one of the white wall panes, as if to say that thought isn't strong enough to stand in 'front' of real-like objects.

Great job once again. I know you're telling a story, but I can't see these and not be pulled in by the opulence of detail, each piece so well worked out. Love it. I WILL read earlier chapters one of these days; The last several weeks didn't allow that. (In addition to a month long computer meltdown, I had another ID theft---sounds familiar to you, doesn't it?---and other things.) I'm glad your life is settling more, and I hope it gets a lot easier as the season wears on...

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