The Swimmer revised by ChuckbMe
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I appreciate the constructive feedback on the original submission generously offered by rajib. I've been a student/developing artist and now published, but this is the first time I have received a constructive comment. Naturally I thought that was awesome! And dead on target. So thank you and this is the revised version based on the observation reprinted below. Hope you like this one:)
rajib () posted at 9:13PM Sat, 24 September 2016
That pose on the center character kinda does not go with the swimming pool prop used. The water would be at least waist height and that pose looks unnatural because of that. It would more natural in a beach scene or a very shallow water body. Other than that nice posing all around.
Comments (7)
crender
Amazing!!!!
rajib
Glad to see the update :). Looks so much better ! Keep it up and keep at it.
blankfrancine Online Now!
Great scene with fine models.
makennedy
Nice...
Cyve
Fantastic scene's composition!!!
thewiz3d Online Now!
out standing look.
ChuckbMe
Thanks to all of you! You have all been helpful and kind -- Cheers!:)