Dodge This [WIP?] by sgi
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Is there anything I should add or edit?? Lighting? Atmosphere? Hmm.. More detailwork (in reflections, other props like a chopper, car, plane, whatever??) Tell me! :)
Myself, I'm satisfied with the result.. Just wanna know what others think about it.. If ppl like it, I'll add it to my website! :)
Comments (5)
daeve
Personally I like it the way it is, the only things I would edit would be the lensflare and mabeye the depth of feild. You got X-dof? Its kinda hard to make out the barrel of the gun. Looks good though these are just suggestions. D
sgi
This is rendered with x-dof.. The original render has got a much brighter look than this one... Could adjust the bright and contrast..
Moebius87
Great POV and image concept. IMHO the image does not have as much impact as originally intended because of the lens flares, which draw the eye to it right away and distract from the barrel of the gun. If you panned your camera a fifth of the image width, effectively moving the shooter's head to the right, and bringing the barrel slightly to center, I think it will work much better. I have no technical input on this one... very slick stuff! :o)
sgi
Thanks for comments! :) This is just beta two. Beta three is to find @ www.ohv-gfx.net/render/cs_dodge_this3.jpg Didn't do anything 'bout what u said, since I just read this..
Guillermo
I think its great but agree with M, reduce a bit the lens flare to make them more transparent ;-) Anyway outstanding POV and composition! ;-)