the room by domingoadriansojo
Open full image in new tab Members remain the original copyright holder in all their materials here at Renderosity. Use of any of their material inconsistent with the terms and conditions set forth is prohibited and is considered an infringement of the copyrights of the respective holders unless specially stated otherwise.
Description
victoria 4.2, the girl 4
Comments (2)
Faemike55
Very nice
domingoadriansojo
thank you
BillySheers
I think this one has great potential. you might consider going back into 'the room' and doing some more work. the separation of the two figures is the most jarring and yet most compelling aspect. I'm wondering if you pushed the camera in even closer, forcing even more apparent distance between them, allowing the eyes to be drawn a bit more to the figure in the background, even though closer in would bring the foreground figure right up to our eyes. The sun is clearly catching the head of the background figure. that's gives you the opportunity to make more use of her shadow, perhaps changing the sun's angle while being in a tighter might force that head shadow into more prominence. bring the camera up a bit too.. anyway, you play with it. you haven't gotten all you can from this one yet. .....nice work.
domingoadriansojo
thank you