Trouble in the deep... who did this?... by Diemamker
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Well here's the second page of this story... which I'm finding that interest in it is slowly dying down... I'll probably write a few more pages and if it seems not to have any interest I'll just end it... and may make it in to a PDF and then make it available to who ever wants to read it... well we'll see..
I hope everyone is doing all right and have a good one..
Dan..
Comments (18)
donnena
Very cool!!
Kratoonz
Interesting
ontar1
Fantastic scenes and characters!
eekdog
So highly professional work on this, Dan. Each scene is tremendously done.
Radar_rad-dude
This scenario is way too scary to not be taken seriously! I applaud your work here! It points to the most serious flaw in the United States of America today. The commander in grief! Love this one and look forward to the next chapter! Very well put together! Put me down and very interested! Bravo and many fine kudos!!!!!
RodS
"You could always lie..." LOL, now that IS funny! Why not - he does it all the time!
This is great, Dan! You've put a lot of thought into it, and it shows! Great work on the images dialogue and expressions! I'm definitely interested - as always a pleasure!
I'm not sure what's going on with the slowdown of comments lately.. I know a lot of good folks have left Rendo, and there seems to be an influx of new folks that seem to feel they don't need to leave comments, but enjoy getting them. And I suppose a lot of folks are busy with summer stuff, vacations, kids home from school and so on.
I know I've tried posting on several other sites, but none are as active comments-wise as here. I'm lucky to get 3 comments on anything I post at DA... And it's not much better at the others.
Hopefully it will start picking up again. I'd sure hate to see you give up on this - it's too good!
Madbat
You could always lie...I love that line.
That's the main reason I quit writing stories here and generally stopped posting much. If there's no interest, what's the point?
anitalee
Excellent
romangirl
Love it!
bucyjoe
good job
starship64
I can't imagine why interest in your work would be decreasing. This is fantastic!
Richardphotos
obviously sold by corrupt military brass. I like this new twist to your story. do you lay awake at night thinking up these new ideas?
outstanding composition and characters/props
Diemamker
Some times...
Faemike55
I like the idea of the smoking holes in the ground - Gosh! I wonder how they got there? Hmmmmm....
Freethinker56
Very well done Dan. Scene characters and story with some humor
GrandmaT
Excellent work! I love the comment of the guy in the last panel about lying. Why should they change tactics now?
IceDragonArt
And they most likely will lie lol.
As far as interest goes, keep in mind that its summertime, at least where I live and I for one, spend a lot less time online than I do when the weather is not as nice.
Crudelitas
I wonder what the military gentlemen say when they spot Ranpha and the girls, with all their talents. Terrific done, Dan!
rajib
The plot thickens ! "You could always lie".... a real classic line Dan ;)... I am having fun reading these.... and for me its like binge watching the series rather than waiting for the next episode... so much more fun ;) !