Trouble in the deep... I tried to warn you!.. by Diemamker
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Looks like I'll be continuing after all... well here's the next page, I hope it to your enjoyment! I should have the next one soon, it seem like this story is starting to take off... I just hope I can hang on.So what you think so far, I know the action is a little slow but I hope to get to some action in next few pages.
Thanks everyone for those great comment you gave for me to continue, I'll see how long I can. and Thanks again...
Dan...!
Comments (17)
ontar1
Just love the story, fantastic scenes and characters!
eekdog
Ranpha has many tricks up her sleeve/s. Great story and panel work. Got to see what happens next. Keep em' coming.
Richardphotos
what? no foxy ladies? great story line and I am eager to see further developments
donnena
Was Dan in the locked bank vault, too??? Super job!!
tetrasnake
Excellent work!
anitalee
Excellent
Wolfenshire
It takes a while for a story to take off. I did two hundred chapters of Charlie before it caught on, and by that time I was ready to move on to a new story. Persistence is the key, it's a good storyline.
starship64
LOL! This is great.
Freethinker56
Glad your continuing Dan. I like your writing and this is great.. Just don't get up here as often sadly
The images are always fantastic I usually leave with a smile... Always some part gives me a giggle...thanks Cheers 
GrandmaT
Anything is possible when you are dealing with Ranpha. Excellent!
RodS
woke up inside a bank vault in London? Oh, he got off easy..... She musta been in a good mood that day! LOL
A great addition to the story, Dan! You're doing great with this - I do hope you continue! Any adventure with Ranpha & Co. is a good time, guaranteed!
Just got back home today, so lots of catching up to do! LOL
Diemamker
You haven't heard everything about it!!….
Diemamker
Thanks for all the great comments...
Crudelitas
Great Characters and Environment. I'm curious how the story evolves. Very well done, Dan!
IceDragonArt
Glad you decided to keep going!
Navi
Nice work on this part, looking forward the next events :)
Faemike55
interesting set up! what's next?
rajib
Now that is interesting Dan.... He got locked up by Ranpha in a London bank vault ? Poor him.... or maybe not so poor him and he deserved more.... He definitely is an uptight guy.... probably thinks he is smarter than her.